Reviews for Atonement
SakuraCherryBlossomKokoro chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
Hey I love this story. I wrote one too and I would like to tell you that I used your almost cracking my skull line sort of. Sorry I think I did it unconsciously but I noticed so I wanted to tell you. I don't want to seem umm wel fake. Anyway I love your story very much as I said in the beginning and I read some other stories from you as well and I liked them too but this is perhaps my favorit :D
orenjikiseki from LJ chapter 12 . 4/24/2010
*turned into melted puddle of herself* moe~~

so many cute scenes... I feel like reading it over and over again~~

I agree Ainosuke, he's the best when he smiles (and smirks, and snickers and all...XD)! aw, I feel so mellow~~

The scenes between Hitomi and Yume are a total win! For a long time I wanted to see some interaction and this feels so right~~ I love how she tried to drag him to her room XDD I love how Yume smoothly ditched her efforts XD I love how Ainosuke teased his brother about that~~ I feel so happy all of a sudden :3

and the last sentences are really nice, feels like a good ending note~~

*goes back to her melting XDD*
kazuko59 chapter 12 . 4/23/2010
nice ending~!
Tsuna De Vongola Decimo chapter 12 . 4/23/2010
Aw. 3 Cute ending~ I'm so glad they are both happy
kazuko59 chapter 11 . 4/23/2010
oh my gosh, this so heart-warming!

good job(_)! hope you'll write again for another(_)
tsubasaquill from LJ chapter 11 . 4/22/2010

orenjikiseki from LJ chapter 11 . 4/22/2010
*died* Yumehito, you're the best... is he a walking miracle or something...? *in awe*
orenjikiseki from LJ chapter 10 . 4/22/2010
Yume sure makes a slightly evil cop with all those snickers xD

I smell too much coincidences in the air...XD oh, scary cliffhanger~~ I can't help wanting the next chapter, but the thought that it will be the last one... is so sad ;_;
tsubasaquill from LJ chapter 9 . 4/22/2010
this is awesome!
tsubasaquill from LJ chapter 8 . 4/22/2010
How uncool...its amazing how well you've managed to capture the character of Yumehito...

this is exciting!
orenjikiseki from LJ chapter 8 . 4/22/2010
it feels really like the drama O.o

oh, Ainosuke is coming to rescue his brother! Such a perfect plot :D but yeah, Yume became uncool...XD nice thing to see him all well and uncool from time to time, really XD

I was thinking for some time already about this buta tori gang... and now you mention them... XD makes my detective senses working~~ XDD

but Hitomi and her switching to call Yume by his name was the best :DD that's so much like her XD

Kato-san is like an island of calmness in this part. Sasuga Kato-san, it must be the work experience XDD you're really good in writing suspense~~
orenjikiseki from LJ chapter 7 . 4/22/2010
nice to see Ainosuke back to his activity~~ XDD

I really love the conversation between Kato and Yume XD! especially the part when Yume explained Ainosuke's reaction related to the kidnappers. And I adore Kato-san for going with Yume's flow too~~ I guess I really like the talking parts XD
tsubasaquill from LJ chapter 6 . 4/22/2010
i love the way their both trying so hard to return to the old days...
orenjikiseki from LJ chapter 6 . 4/22/2010
I just need to comment, I adore this chapter XD their roles seem to change~~

And Yume did almost the exact thing that Ainosuke did somewhere in the beginning of the special! XD I enjoyed this little scene a lot XD

oh and Ainosuke peeking into computer, I knew he wouldn't let me down! XDD

by the way, Yume keep on sleeping around a lot, that's somehow very cute...XD

too bad, I don't know this cartoon XD
tsubasaquill from LJ chapter 5 . 4/22/2010
this is so intense...such raw emotions!

You are a genius!
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