|Reviews for Double Trouble|
| Aamaterasu chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
Hey, the chapters are getting too short for my liking, you know!
I mean, just a little scene and its over!This is ridiculous!There is no fun unless the chapter is long enough to keep ya captivated! This size of chapters is acceptable only if the story is being updated daily, otherwise they should be at least 700-800 words long(you get the idea?)
Hoping to see a bigger chap next time!
| Lord Spiff-Dico chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
kinda short, but you've got it well. i'm guessing poking their sides woke them?
| Aamaterasu chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
| Lord Spiff-Dico chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
this...is...PERFECT! THANK YOU!