Reviews for Some Days It Doesn't Pay
Calworks chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
HOLY
OH MY
ARE YOU KIDDING
That was a perfectly beautiful final line. So much applause from this corner. All the applause. Every hand clapping. Did you set up the entire story just for that one line or did you seize the opportunity when you saw it? Because either way, it's brilliant...
Ship's Cat chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
What a story and just to deliver a pun...shame on you!
nariB chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
groans at pun...you are a sick puppy, but its a quality i admire greatly in you lol
LaH Carabele chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Wonderful story, giving a real feel for the less glamorous side of being an agent.

I absolutely adored this line: "The trust was back and I took a deep, thankful breath and then ruined the moment by gagging at the smell of blood. This never happens in the movies."

[grin] So true!

And of course the last pun is classic.
karonkgb chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Obviously, the Czech is in the male."

Has Napoleon thought of dry cleaning?
Auntie Minerva chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
*arggh!* Funny and clever. Thanks for brightening my day!
Deedaladee chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Ah, that was great. Clever and fun!
Lothithil chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
*writhes in agony* I love it! You are a punning fiend, Charlie!

*giggles and groans aloud*
I Keep Goldfish In My Bra chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
It is a balmy oh, 15 degrees celcius over this side of the pond, and you've managed to put shivers down my spine. Feel proud :D