Reviews for In My Life
GeeklyChic95 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Poor Jasper...I Loved It Thou
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Absolutely beautiful. Touching. Loving.
beanothercullen chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I can honestly say, this is one story I don't know who I feel worse for. Wow, that was a tough one.
Origami Fangs chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
i'm crying :'(((((( xxxxxxxx
Bubbye chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Ugh...you broke my heart. Beautiful, touching story. Though I so hoped for a different end as all us HEA-whores do (lol), it was lovely. Thanks much for sharing it.
Snappher chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
what the FUCK! why would he pick stupid Bella when he could have Jasper? gah!

I hate Edward. what a douche!

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I hope they die on their effin' honeymoon :

sniffle sniffle...
kgq chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
OM fecking God I never cried so hard in all my life I love this story so sad wish it would have turned out better for Jasper and Edward...have to go now wash my face then start crying all over again thank you
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Why do you always manage to make me cry? I should have known it would happen, thats why it took me so long to read this."sighs"!And I feel a little sick to my stomache too.
Kira Kiralina chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Heartbreaking story. Again, I am left wondering about their future.
Fliberty chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Grr! This was from me too:

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That was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.

You portrayed the two points of view very well. This is such a happy story from Edward’s perspective but so incredibly painful from Jasper’s. I could feel his torment, yet he tried so hard to be a supportive friend and Best Man for Edward.

I wonder if Bella ever suspected anything.

I would love to know what happened to Jasper after the wedding and if he ever found someone who could help him to heal and be truly happy. I imagine him meeting someone who provokes feelings that surpass those he had for Edward and make him realise he was meant for someone else.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
That was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time.

You portrayed the two points of view very well. This is such a happy story from Edward’s perspective but so incredibly painful from Jasper’s. I could feel his torment, yet he tried so hard to be a supportive friend and Best Man for Edward.

I wonder if Bella ever suspected anything.

I would love to know what happened to Jasper after the wedding and if he ever found someone who could help him to heal and be truly happy. I imagine him meeting someone who provokes feelings that surpass those he had for Edward and make him realise he was meant for someone else.
AnnaLund chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
beautiful. sad. so sad.

"I suffered while their life began around me"

says it all.

thank you for writing

anna
laylawray chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
omg..heart wrenching! great story. this is why you are on my author alert
Mrs. Giselle Cullen chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Well shit. This story made me bawl my eyes out! Wow. So sad.
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
So sad :-( Poor Jaasper. I enjoyed reading it though.
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