Reviews for Cake
Profitmom chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Cute!
hester4418 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
That was brilliant! It was already good with just J&C, but the last bit was the icing on the cake! (pun intended) Love the way it all seems so natural.
Kerry J chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
How come I haven't commented earlier? I was sure I had.

I found this story a while ago and loved it immediately! It's funny and touching in equal parts, their conversation very believable. I could hear them talking and I loved how you let on that they're together without actually saying it. And the twist with Tom and B'Elanna at the end was priceless. I'd love to see how the talks go when they swapped partners. :D
every1ssleeping chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
LOL. That was *awesome*. And the turnabout! xD Congratulations!
Jordan Trevor chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I was in the mood to hear Kathryn and Chakotay talking, so I thought I’d read another one of your stories. You didn’t let me down. It’s like eavesdropping on two old friends. Thanks for writing their voices so perfectly! JT
beautyofsorrow chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
You did it. You got me to add a J/C story to my favorites. How, I'll never know, but I suspect it has something to do with the way you bring truth, wit, and sparkling eyes to life with so few words. I sit back and applaud you - loud and long. Keep writing, and please... never stop.
CKLizzy chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
*giggles*

That's sweet. But they really should use a schedule do they won't be plotting helping the other couple's happiness both at the same time :D

Wonderful idea, I'd pay to see this onscreen. Especially this subtle intimacy expressed between J/C, how comfortable they are around each other, by the whole cake eating thing.

Lovely story, thank you!
MarMar1 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Excellent work on that challenge! Your little scene rings true, the characters seem natural. I enjoyed the little turn at the end. Well done.
Katharen Silver chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
LOL this is really well written and extremely entertaining, thank you for sharing.

Kat
Marauder-In-Disguise chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
I loved this. I really like the way you write and think about things. I got really excited when I saw that you had uploaded more stuff because 'Everybody Comes To Sandrine's' is the reason I started believing in J/C. Thank you _
sophiedoodle chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Oh my gosh-LOVED the turnabout at the end! A total surprise! Well done :)
LynnEGib chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I love how you turned things at the end so they are both trying to help each other. I wish the command team would have figured things out there rather than drift apart
mab13j chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Well,you certainly met the challenge! Well done!