|Reviews for The Visit|
| KaiNDove chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
I really liked this. Actually, I read it a while ago, I think, and didn't realise there was a second chapter. The second chapter was my favourite, but overall, it was well done! I especially liked your characterization of Sam. Also, when you were talking about misanthropy and that it shouldn't be that easy to smile in such a way - that line is perfect, and I think it resounds in real life as well, when people find something worth holding onto in isolation. Really lovely that you can pull on those thoughts and feelings.
| kris rodriguiz chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
i love this story it is very good u suld make more
| Shadows.in.the.moon chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
awwmiiigoooowwwdd! cuteness X3
| Jezebel Jai-Braxlin chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
I loved this story. I didn't notice too much of a difference in narration, and I didn't think it to be too scattered. It is a beautiful idea, sad, but beautiful. I wish you could continue it, but, unless I am mistaken, this seems to be the end. Thank you for this wonderful piece, it was an amazing read .
| Jezebel Jai-Braxlin chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I am very curious to see where this goes. I think you should definitely continue it .
| Thecricketsarecalling chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Really interesting. In fact I've never seen a love story like this before. I would love to see if you would keep going with it. Amazing, I hope you update!
| LmarikoL chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
I encourage you to continue, this is good and if you do continue, I will read it.
| Raaee chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Very interesting writing, liked it a lot.