Reviews for For the Kill
RenesmeVivio chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
Great now I'm scared of encountering Aki (the witch, the monster). Don't worry about my soul she will not kill me, because I was wispering these words for her not to hear.
Poor Yusei.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
Wow, Lu, that was stunningly good. I dont think I've ever read something so short, yet still so good, honestly.
nightowl880 chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
I am literally crying. This is probably one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. The way you portrayed Akisa (Akiza? Idk how to spell her name) is so shadowed and hurt and this is just AMAZING.
Melan Anime chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
so sad! But this is how it is whene you are in love...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
that was dark.
hey for your 100th story you should have yusei and aki/akiza switch roles so yusei is the pshycic (i know i spelt it wrong.) dulest and aki came form the slums of satilete (i spelt it wrong too.) and wants to help yusei. it. would. ROCK if you wrote that.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
OMG, this is so depressing but so good at the same time! I love it.
SunsetRika chapter 1 . 2/16/2012!
crimgate chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
dark but good
Aphrodite96 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
so sad, so horrible, so ...good. Description so well written. I don't know if I'm in love with it or I hate it, in a good way.
serpenscape chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Oh my god, that was so sad! But really good at the same time. And if you're wondering why you suddenly have a bunch of reviews from me, it's because I'm reading all the stories you've written...strange, I know.
the fifth siginer chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
solar flare dragon girl chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
It's so sad, but still u did great :D
tivany luqman chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
it may not be 1000 words, but it's still a good story.
Diceskin chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
that was pretty good to be so short
eight-orange-flowers chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Very nice. I love how you used white as a symbol for redemtion in the beginning. The last line of the fic just wrapped the whole thing up so well too. The way you descibed how much Yusei ment to Aki was just so beautifully written. Although, I'm gonna play devil's advocate right now. The line, "You are nothing but my world" kinda implies that Yusei is saying that Aki would be nothing without him there to give her meaning to her life. Maybe I'm reading too much into it. Anyway, good fic and keep up the great work! Midorchi-chan
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