Reviews for Center of Attention
PreciousD chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
that's a really great o/s. and damn hot :) oh yes the vision of Jasper and Bella and Peter is very... yummie!

i'd love to share a night at the club with them ;P
lynne0731 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010

That was hot!

ElleCC chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Oh my. YUM. Loved all of it! Loved their backstory and their arrangement and that they found a place they could be themselves, even if just for a little while.

GUH. Sign me up for a rich kid party! Maybe I can find a Peter and a Jasper there )

Thanks so much for sharing this with us! Good luck! )
1dreamkeeper chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
you shout make this in to a longer story. great job
sweetp-1 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Oh you know how to make a girl all hot and bothered. Goddamn I cannot get enough of your Peter/s. This was SO GOOD bb. Well done x
chele681 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
You know I loved this in the best of ways. I'm so glad you decided to share it with the class.
bmango chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Wow. That was...exciting doesn't even really cover it. Nice dry hump, bb... Wow. -b
lalibare chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
loved it
EdwardsKitten chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I loves me a good threesome! Thank you!
mssmith chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Mother of God! That was right up there with the hottest thing I have ever read! Wow...Thank you.
TwilightMundi chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Whew! That was hot, bb. I do love some PB&J!
ColourmeCullen chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
UNF. So freaking hot! Love me some Jasper 3 way lovin'! ;)
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
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jfc, woman. you trying to kill people here? wow.
tawelephant chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Holy hell this is hot. Damn!
SnowyHedwig chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Wow. I am SO loving this contest! Nicely done, very hot. Good luck!
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