Reviews for Chromia's Response
Ha-Hee Prime chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Boo-yah. Sometimes ol' Oppy needs someone to tell him when he's being an idiot. Good on you! (And good on Chromia.) I get all sad/mad/defiant whenever people write Prime and Elita falling away from each other, too. They just CAN'T!

There are a few typos, if you feel like editing.
Botosphere chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
YEAH! Chromia to the rescue! :D Nice job capturing their emotions with this ficlet. Prime really does need to realize that even he needs someone. ~ Eowyn77
Kusari-Gama 61602 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010

O.O I didn't know she could be so...forceful. Though I luv how she defended her sister. .

Gosh, she is persistant. I would have been frozen in fear and possibly could have fainted if she did that to me...


Great story, luved it!
VeekaIzhanez chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
nice story. (reply)