Reviews for I Refuse To Beg
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I loved it!
XoxTristinaaaDuhhhxoX chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Ohhh, this was nice! It described her feelings to a T! Or a B, rather. Get it, get it? Anyways, this wwas an amazing one-shot and make sure you write more!
Ruby Romance chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
wow! that's such a long way to say i love you! aww :"
Phantanos chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
At last someone writes about brittany's inner most thoughts. Her mixed emotions about Alvin! Well thought out and funny. She loves then hates. I would call this a companion piece to Alvin Brittany love tales. 1. Kiss me: Brittany wants to be kissed. with guilt: Alvin apologizes to her. this prompts her to kiss him. 3. I refuse to beg: The heart of the story. 4. Hate you,Love you: Her heart spills out! 5. It's hard being Brittany: alvin shows that he appreciates Brittany. All thease titles are one shots; but if read in this order, a novel story is formed. I refuse to beg reads like a set up for: Hate you ,Love you.
valderois chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Wow! This story is really great. This sounds exactly what I would think Brittany would say if she ever went on a rant just to get through to Alvin.

Oh, Alvin...why must you be so clueless?
knk4891 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
"It's just like that song by that other Brittany girl."

LOL I loved that part! You are so good at getting the readers inside Brittany's head. Nice job. :)
Victory's Wonder chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
I like it.

'But I swear...you better not laugh.'

Awesome.
Snidget1559 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
aww! that was cute:) lol. alvin can be so clueless!

now, is this supposed to be a letter? like as in brittany gives this to him? because that would be really cute 3 like she would slip this note into his locker or something...

anywho, this was cute! wow. Brittany has a sensitive side, who would have known? lol.
SPARK187 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
What a nice story. Brittany really got her feeling out there. Great job.
Dancing-StarryEyedDemigod chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Aw, very sweet and short. I love the last line. Very well written.

-S
RakkiiHappiiDokkiiShidonii chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Wow. This is awesome. )

You got Brittany's personality PERFECTLY!

I'm serious! This was adorable! It is totally what Brittany would say and think. Their(Alvin and Britt) relationship is so...interesting. They fight alot but it's their way of showing they like each other. And this story captures that perfectly.

Though, I was kind of disappointed with the ending...

I was hoping for this;

"It's not like I'm afraid to tell you. I'm not afraid of anything.

So fine…

I'll tell you.

But I swear… you better not laugh.

I love you."

I know! Only three words. But I was hoping for them for some reason. o.o

~Peace n Love.
MasterOf4Elements chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
this was really cute!
ChipmunkfanNo.1 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
I thought you got Brittany's love/hate feelings for Alvin 100% correct. I hope that she will find out that he feels the same way about her.
Akira Sieghart chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
That was cute, but I think you should've shown the scene where Brittany actually DOES tell Alvin... either way, good job!
Know1inparticular chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
is she talking or thinking?
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