|Reviews for Broken Bow Book 3: Counterpart|
| arack14 chapter 9 . 3/13
Okay I just want to say, this series is fantastic. I realize I still have 2 more books to go but what I've read so far is some of the best fanfiction I've ever read. I don't know if you've ever read The Bartimaeus Trilogy or not (I highly, highly recommend it if you have not) but Armani reminds me a great deal of Bartimaeus. I love his dry, sarcastic sense of humor, as well as his sometimes cynical attitude. For some reason, the line "You know, I can't help but get the feeling I've done something to antagonize you" from Book 2 when Nico is threatening Armani made me laugh out loud. It's a perfect example of that type of humor that I love. But I also like that Armani can be serious when he wants to, just as Bartimaeus; he doesn't take things seriously very often, but it's because of that fact that when he does, it really means something. Anyways, just wanted to leave those thoughts here, and I'm looking forward to finishing the series.
p.s. I'm also a huge fan of Artemis Fowl myself :) ...But seriously, read the Bartimaeus books if you haven't. They're fantastic. Just like your fanfiction :)
| AlabasterTorrington chapter 9 . 6/7/2016
The references are so real. Also, you are combining of my fav series, so well done, thank you. The earlier line about an Irish mastermind and his group of fairies was referring to this, i guess?
| daughterofhermes02 chapter 9 . 4/7/2016
One day I hope these stories get published because you have amazing writing skills
| lunarchroniclesandcockatiels chapter 9 . 12/2/2015
i was literally sobbing at the end of this. i read three books about him, and now he dies?
| Friend Of A Fangirl chapter 9 . 11/19/2015
OH MY GOODNESS YES PLEASE. GIVE ME SOME ARTEMIS FOWL.
| Zoanzon chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
Oh...oh my. Well then...
THIS is gonna be interesting.
Well he ever make it back, is yet another question. :D
| Zoanzon chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
...Alright, I think I know where this is going.
And I APPROVE.
| ThePitchBlack chapter 4 . 7/15/2015
Wow...you accurately portrayed the Moirai (Fates). Most fanfiction have them talking, but you preserved them. Nicely done. The mute inclination and the rather chaotic destruction, no matter how minor, shows it all. I thank you for actually getting the Fates right.
| Bryce Jackson chapter 8 . 1/15/2015
| Fireclaw chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
| vindrueelsker chapter 9 . 8/13/2014
Greetings Xed Alpha
Yet another installment of Broken Bow I've just finished reading. I must admit that I was less than thrilled when I saw it was about alternate dimensions, though now that I have read it, I must also admit the fact that my fears was unfounded. You managed to create a catching story, with many a funny moment. And though it doesn't resonate within me as much as the first installment did, I am not above admitting that I felt my eyes wetting by the end of the last chapter.
Speaking of the last chapter, I don't quite know what to think or feel about the Artemis Fowl crossover, probably because I think the Artemis Fowl books were good, until the events after book 3 happened. But I have faith that you will make it an enjoyable read nonetheless.
The grammar and pacing of Broken Bow III was just as great as in the first two installments, but it still leave us wondering how the Eris contacted hef counterpart and had conversations with her by the end. I guess we could find out in installment IV, as it could be a way for Amarni to return or contact the people of his home dimension.
Lastly, I just wanted to praise you for being an awesome enough author that you could provoke tears from me not once but twice now. I greatly enjoy your writings, and once I'm finished reading Broken Bow, then I think I will start reading your other works.
| S'Tidey chapter 9 . 8/3/2014
| S'Tidey chapter 4 . 8/2/2014
This story is just amazing!
| S'Tidey chapter 3 . 8/2/2014
THIS IS AMAZING'
| S'Tidey chapter 2 . 8/2/2014