Reviews for A Lack of Communication
Adamantyne chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Brilliant! You manage to fit a lot into 600 words! I really liked the reiterations. Beautifully written!
Breezybiatch chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
So sad, but yes. This seems very realistic.
Sony Boy chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Oh Sh!t. An arrange marriage that if they talk would end in tears, blood and hate.

I guess, apathy is a better choice compared to that. but still...
ylfrettub chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Interesting take on their marriage., I think.
TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Well, I can see why you're the angst queen. Arranged marriages kinda suck. Ha, that's a little funny. 'You smack me, I'll hit you right back!'
Iroka chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Really enjoyed this and I find it very believable. I have thought this theory of the two having an arranged marriage due to their age difference and clashing personalities before. Very simple but I really like, going on my favs list. No critique on my end, but I'd love to see a full-length story on this.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Very neat how you had the story sort of come full circle in the end.
RaawrImaDinosaur chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Poor Mikoto and Fugaku. A marriage without love, sad :(
Starfire201 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Sad, and yet somehow makes a lot of sense. I suspect many arranged marriages have worked in this way.
SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Sad, but strangely sensible. I feel like I've seen a different side to both Mikoto and Fugaku. Well done.