|Reviews for Mitzvah|
| Jasmine Star chapter 1 . 4/2
OMG, I LOVED THIS! :-) there needs to be more like it!
| ThatRandomPersonWhoLovesSP chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
...What I just read? O_O
| KKtheRipper chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Holy Fuck...I'm going to hell for liking this...
| RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
I did enjoy my rape, why thank you for asking. 3
| KarinLockhartFrost chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
wow, I was not expecting to see Cartman be this bad...I liked it, it is very, very well written.
| InuBunnygirl chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Pretty good! Dark, filled with pain, and, best of all, Cartman. Perfect story! I don't even care that I'm a monster for loving this story. Great job! :-)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Is incredible...so hot...
| BigFan4242 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Dear firetrucking lawd.
That was so twisted and horrifying and oh my goodness I think I have goosebumps on my arms. Dear shizz I swear to you there's like a shiver going down my spine right now.
But whoa that was pretty darn hot. I mean everything about it, whew *fans self* It's getting a little hot in here.
This was pretty darn amazing. Oh my gawd so, so goooooood (:
| Langruo chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
OMG. I can't believe how good you're at this, seriously...awesome
| Sainly-Sad chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
-Drool- wow...that was awesome! Poor Kyle! Not only hurting him, but hurting him using his religion in such a way is just cold...
Well written! Cart man (damn auto correct) should do it again next year!
| Fallen Leafs chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
That's some seriously intense pent-up hatred...
| The March Hatter chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Holy. Mother. Fuck. This, right here, was fucked up dude. And I have to say that now I must Love/Hate/Fear/Respect you for it. it was an amazing job- the writing, The tone, The Cannonical Tinges. The utter fucked-up-ness that is Cartman defiling Kyle in the guise of a holy jewish celebration, and just Cartmans utter fucked-up-ness in general. I may vomit, I may cry, I may just read it again. Hell, I'll probably just do all three. Just . . . Dude.
| Shakuhachi Jade chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Epic awesome awesomeness. I LOVED this, mainly because Kyle and Cartman were so in character through most of it, but as usual your writing style is also always a treat to read. ;)
My sister (who also read this, but is a lazy butt and probably won't review XD) had a good point when we discussed this fic. She mentioned that Cartman might hate the Jews SO much that he probably wouldn't learn all of those customs by heart just to humiliate Kyle. He just wouldn't want to know them period, because that would make him more Jewish by default. I, however, didn't have a problem with that; I thought his hatred of the Jews and Kyle in general would have been plenty enough motivation to learn and then defile the customs.
Something that I did think was slightly OOC (only slightly though) was the fact that Kyle immediately thought he would never tell anyone what had happened, even if he did remember it later. My sis said that he would probably be even more secure in his religious beliefs afterward - that the pain he'd been through would solidify why he believed in the first place. His fiery, strong personality and mutual hatred of Cartman would motivate him to get the larger male in lots of trouble for committing such a heinous crime.
I'm not very familiar with rape scenes, though, so I also argued against myself that Kyle was in such deep shock and shame that he simply caved and gave up on life. I'm guessing if I was raped that's probably how I'd feel (at least at the time of the act itself; maybe not afterward).
But, OH MY GOD lady! SO good. ;D I could re-read this a million times and not get bored; I'd find something new to discuss each and every time I finished it, and that's the quality of professional shit. Have you considered publishing any of these as original works? "Clean Living" would be a great one to switch up the names and sell as your very own; your Butters and your Kenny are different enough from the original SP characters that it could be very easily accomplished! D (Hell, I would definitely buy it!)
Anyway, I'm kind of just ranting now. lol This was a very great little ficlett, and I hope to see more Kyman one-shots (or even a multi-chapter story or two?) from you in the future! Great job, thanks for sharing, post more South Park stories plzzzz, etc, etc! :D
| XJhoker chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
OMG Holy shit o_o
That was intense...
| Life Starts Now chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Wow. Insanely dark. 0_0 That's what I get for reading South Park fanfiction. But this was really intense - vivid emotion and good integration of culture, however painfully. The only thing I didn't like was you occasionally had some very strange prose. _
-Life Starts Now