|Reviews for Waiting Always Waiting|
| burning.x.impossibly.x.bright chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Holy cow! I loved it!
That definitely was some fun with their clothes on haha
I loved how you weaved in the characters from the books too :)
Where do we vote? :)
LOVED IT! :D
| ecxe chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
this is a perfect one shot. love how edward was so patient. he knows what he wants.
| alekeneka chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This is fantastic! My favorite part was that whole dialogue of how he knew how she liked her coffee and that she liked tomato soup and grilled cheese on a rainy day. I loved it. Great job. This is definitely going under my favorites!
| EmoryB123 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Good job! I think you will do well in the contest!
Bella older than Bella - that was so hot!
And Edward's decision based on Bella's school - the boy has guts!
Keep up the good work!
| AH Darling chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Oh this was so sweet! And different. It's usually the other way around...Bela pining for Edward. This was a refreshing change!
| sherylaf chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Always a pleasure getting a sneak peek at the goods! LOL. I like that you were able to pull of not only a different Bella, but a different Edward as well. The difference in age and experience made an interesting situation. Well played. I'll admit though...it took me a minute to stop cringing whenever Emmett told Bella she was hot. I'm not used to him not being Em-bear. But this Emmett was just as hilarious.
"Did you just grab my ass?" Buwahahaha. I still crack up at that. I can totally imagine his face.
| coldplaywhore chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Okay, that was friggin adorable. I could totally picture Kellan Lutz raising his hand and having Jasper smack him. The whole scene with the gas station was effing classic too! Good Luck with the contest!
| lore191 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
i loved it! i wouldnt mind a sequel ;)
| Courtney37 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
aww that was a cute and hot as hell story. lol I wouldn't mind seeing a before and after part to this story if you were ever interested, hint hint! lol I love it. thanks again bye
| katmom chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
| AnotherJen chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
That was totally freakin amazing! I think it just might be my fave yet! Perfect use of leg hitch! I've got to go check out your other stuff!
| edwardsothalova chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
you never disappoint! this would be so wonderful expanded... hehe! Great job babe! Can't wait to vote!
| CynMar Rom chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
aw that was so sweet!
| llynn20 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
In trying to find the 'next big fic', I sometimes fail to realize how much fun an awesome o/s can be. And this one was awesome!
It very effectively brought me back to a very similar situation when I was about that age. My best friend's younger brother... ah... the memories...
| Scorpiorobin chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
HELL YEAH! I freaking loved it! thank you!