Reviews for Meant To Be
dori-tori chapter 14 . 10/18/2012
interesting ending...i liked it but i wouldve preferred them to have more goin on as teens.

xx dori-tori
2255swim chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
Love it! But I think that there were two points in the story in which you meant to say 'definitely' not 'defiantly'. Either way, it's really good!
bookworm2341 chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
aw this was sooo cute! I loved it!
ThePagesFlyBy chapter 14 . 9/2/2011
AWW! I love the way you added crazy Mike into the whole thing! Really wonderfully done!
fan-freak121 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
love it.
CuteLiLDucky chapter 4 . 12/2/2010
WOAH! GOOD CHAPTER! I never expected so much action so early, but I am not complaining! I liked how everything I was asking about in the last review was answered, but now I have more questions: If they hadn't spoken in four years, when did they first sleep together? When they were 14? Gross. And it wasn't the night her dad died, was it? Cause that's... not right.

What I loved about this that kind of surprises me is how natural it was for them to pick right back up where they had left off, even if they see each other almost every day. And how it was more obvious how much he wanted her. It's usually the other way around.

Best part: Where Jesse asked if she wanted to glue macaronni to the outside of a shoebox. haha. Way to break the tension! I also loved how the kiss immediately broke her wall and she was into it right away. LOVED IT! Best chapter so far!
CuteLiLDucky chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
Okay, i think i made a mistake with last chapter. I think i thought the "best friend" was Jesse's friend Adam who liked CeeCee. But now I know better. And now i am more surprised.

I really enjoyed reading this from Suze's perspective. She seems more bad ass in this than in the books, but in a different way. Her situation is so sad, I felt so bad reading the scene where her and David had to clean up after her mum. I hope we get into what happened with her mum. And I also hope we get to see what happened when Jesse went into the treehouse. I am ahead in my slides now, so I can continue reading and reviewing until I go to bed. YES!

Best part: The part where she retreated from the party to go and watch a movie. Something I would probably do. lol. I also liked the part where CeeCee teased her about her feelings for Jesse. I want to know what happened to them!
CuteLiLDucky chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
this chapter was amazing. crazy dramatic though. i'm not quite sure what's going to happen, if the next chapter is going to be ten more years down the road or not. i liked that debbie's house was a mansion. it made me laugh and think about all those teen movies from the nineties where everyone seemed to be rich. i was also surprised that his friend would sleep with his girlfriend. at most, i thought they'd be caught making out or a tad more, but woah, was i surprised.

i've always been very jealous of your writing because you are so good with descriptions, but now, with all the dialogue in this chapter, you are so good at that too. i think i noticed this in the other story, but i was so wrapped up in that one to say anything. but i have to keep stopping to do those lecture slides, you know?

best part: "Hey I've got a thing for quirkiness." haha, yeah, cause six toes is "quirky."
CuteLiLDucky chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
hey there. good start to what i can tell will be an awesome story. as always, i love your descriptions- they make me feel like i am right there, with them.

i love the idea of the tree house. i've always wanted one, even now at 19. and i love how their imaginations have them thinking jesse's mum is an alien.

the best part was where they were planning the trip and she got to chose everything, getting him to agree by saying they'd spend the most time in spain.

i am extremely excited to keep reading this. i have to study for exams from lecture slides, so i think i will go, one week's lectures, one chapter, and so on. sounds like a good plan to me :)
Cecile.Cameron chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Reeeeeeeeeeally gooooood! I loved it! I just think that Max act like he has 16 years, not 18. But it's just my opinion.
EllezBellz chapter 14 . 9/8/2010
Awww... such a lovely story. you should do another version where she told him and he stays, but they're both still stubborn and mad at each other. :-D xXx
1864impala NO LONGER IN USE chapter 14 . 8/22/2010
all i have to say ; is OH MY GOSH!

This is amazing, it really is.

I loved the action side, the hostage situation, the murder, then there was the love side. i loved it all, i really did. excellent job[:
AstoriaRedfern chapter 14 . 7/29/2010
Nice fic. The mediator is probably one of my favorite book series.
kimmi0490 chapter 14 . 7/8/2010
Wow i have absolutely loved this story. You did a fantastic job, well written. D
ticklemecutie chapter 13 . 7/7/2010
OH NOOOOOOO. JESSE DIES? MICHEALS GONNA GO TO JAIL FOR SURE. BUT JESSE? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. :( micheals killing everyone. i knew it was him all along. i just knew it. UPDATE. and let jesse live!
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