Really liked this chapter.(Did I mention that Scott has always been my favorite?)

The idea that he was aware of what was happening,that it was Gordon and then Alan who had hold of him in the water, and that his mother was there stopping him from leaving his father and brothers was a really unusual one, but it works very well, making this the best chapter so far.

Really looking forward to more.

This fic is amazing! There is sucha shortage of really good fic out there on the Thunderbird boys, and you definately deliver!

great chapter cant wait to see wot happens next hope there's more soon

Just caught up with this story and really enjoyed it. Some lovely description, drama and emotion in all the chapters - good work! This chapter from Scott's viewpoint worked really well. And just who is the mysterious 'someone else'? Hoping for a quick update. Bee

OH wow! Gorgeous doesn't even cover this, it was amazing! The way Lucy was still acting like the Mum-with the whole "where do you think you are going?" line was just brilliant! And how he knew exactly what was going on around him whilst being dead- i hope that didn't sound as strange to you as it did me!
Oh wow, wow, wow, i adored this chapter, it was stunning!
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Great update. And don't worry, I've had those lapse's in smartness too. I did it with my senior project. Wrote 47 pages, forgot to save, and my dog's tail unplugged the computer. I had to retype 47 pages in 24 hours. I was livid. I really can't wait to read your next update.

I'm so glad Lucy was there for Scott to give him the encouragement to keep fighting. But how sad that just when he felt his mother's arms around him, he was jerked back into the land of hurt once again...of course it had to happen...we didn't want to lose our Scotty (he's my favorite too).
Bad weather-I hope you aren't experiencing that terrible weather around Nashville!

Aww, so you do strive to be just like me. *grins* Keep trying and one day you may achieve that goal. lol

Dang, Mystik, I was cringing whilst reading the injuries Scott sustained. And may I just say this...OW OW OW!

Loved that you wrote Lucy into the story. I absolutely love the idea that she's still watching out for her boys. And comforts them when they need her.

Great job now get working on chapter 5. Oh, and remember to save your work periodically every time you are writing.

Wow, this is really brilliant! I'm loving it! Only just found it, but adore it! Absolutely love how Gordon jumped straight in after Scott, don't know why, it was just so perfect! And then Alan going into help as well, but it still being Gordon having to keep him calm!

Come on, Scott! Whew, can't wait for your next update, this is brilliant! :)

oh my god poor scott hope he gets better as i can see the family breaking if he doesnt another great chapter cant wait for more

Well at least you've let him breathe again, (and me, holding breathe all the while I was reading,Scott's always been my favorite, since the first time I saw Thunderbirds.

Somehow though I don't think he's out of the woods yet.

Excellent update, you caught the rest of the family's response to the thought of losing big brother very well.

Eagerly awaiting further installments.

Oh crap. why did Scotty holler "NO" With that head wound, you definitely have me concerned there could be some type of permanent damage. And with Scott being a part of IR, that would totally destroy him.

Ples update soon so we'll know what's wrong with Scotty...HE IS MY FAVORITE TOO.

Omg. What a gripping chapter. I swear I held my breath until Scott started breathing again. And I cried when John was panicking for his brother to breathe. I loved the update, and I can't wait for the next one.

Whew, you had me on the edge of my seat throughout this whole chapter waiting to see what happened. I can only imagine the fear that must have went through Scott's families hearts as they watched Scott thrown from the bridge and into the fiery waters below. Luckily, the swimmer of the family was where he could make a rescue attempt. Now, Alan and Gordon just have to be able to get Scotty's heart beating again.

The angst in this chapter was perfect my friend...you couldn't have written it better.

Thanks for the quick update.

You have me hooked on this story, thank god Gordon found poor Scott, really looking forward to the next update.