Reviews for I will try to fix you
Spartan10007 chapter 16 . 11/21/2014
Update this, it's good, and I want more, lol. All in all good story so far, I'm now eager to see where you're going with this
char1234 chapter 16 . 4/26/2013
So Harry obviously has self esteem issues yet people are telling him he's a stupid boy and a liar? Yeah because saying things like that are going to help him get better, and whats with all the man handling? Have the adults forgot that the physical abuse he suffered at Privet Drive is one of the main reasons he self harms, god they are right idiots. Saying that I DO understand why they're doing it, beating around the bush and being nice wasnt working so now their going for the tough love approach and it seems to of made slight progress, for now at least anyway.
I think it's a good choice for Harry to stay with Tonks now they've had their slight brief chat about the kiss, Tonks is the one person who Harry cares about what she thinks of him and is willing to open up to her, hopfully he will after the kiss incident.
I really liked reading this story but after a year and a bit of not updating should I just presuming this story has bben abandoned? I'll favourite it and follow though just incase. Great story, hope for an update soob
char1234 chapter 15 . 4/26/2013
I understand they dont want Harry going St Mungo's because he's famous and they dont want news of his self harm getting out but why not polyjuice him or get a doctor/nurse to swear a magical oath not to tell anyone because he needs serious help and being all nice and calm with him is not working at the moment as can be seen with Remus obviously feeling he's more of a hindrance than a help. They're rapidly running out of ideas as to how to help Harry and sooner rather than late I can see people will be to annoyed with Harry to help him anymore
char1234 chapter 14 . 4/26/2013
The fact Draco helped Harry out tells me he knows about Harry's secret and he has a secret of his own thats similar
char1234 chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
Seems suspicious draco got cut with a knife, I wonder if it was accidental or on purpose
char1234 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
As I was reading this chapter I thought Harry might of turned a corner regardng progress in not self harming but the end just ruined the train of thought
char1234 chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
I've noticed after that near death experience they're going for the "tough love" approach with Harry. What none of them seem to understand is the more they try to get him to talk the more he will retreat back into his shell, he nearly had someone he could of talked too one-on-one (Tonks) but now he's further away from opening up after what happened last time he did.
You've tackled this subject really IMO although the chapters are really short and their is some punctual errors but I cant say im too fussed about that
char1234 chapter 10 . 4/26/2013
So basically he opened up to her and was starting to feel something and she rejected him and put him down as "just a boy". He got totally rejected in a very harsh way and then has the audacity to ask him not to hurt himself? This time it looks like his cutting could have dire consequences.
char1234 chapter 9 . 4/26/2013
An upbeat chapter at least (well compared to previous chapters lol) Woop woop go Harry and Tonks! this is what Harry needs to stop feeling guilty and self harming, someone who likes him as more than a friend
char1234 chapter 8 . 4/26/2013
At least Harry apaologised to Tonks and opened up to her a tiny bit, what he needs is someone to show him that they love him for him, not for the boy who lived or the boy who has to kill Voldemort and I think Tonks can supply that, there's already signs of a chemistry forming between the 2
char1234 chapter 7 . 4/26/2013
Poor Harry, he has a serious problem and something needs to be done other than watching Harry. He's right when he says people need to back off and stop asking him questions all the time, that would get on my nerves too.
char1234 chapter 5 . 4/26/2013
Your getting the depression spot on in your story
char1234 chapter 4 . 4/26/2013
Im not sure if Harry's suicidal or attention seeking, on one side he's says he doesnt want to be alone but when he's surrounded by people he wants to be alone, but then on the other he hasnt forgiven himself for Sirius dying and feels he needs to self inflict to repay his guilt. I can't see Harry getting better when he's clearly so stubborn and set in his ways of guilt.
char1234 chapter 3 . 4/26/2013
Why didn't the wards activate sooner if they was suppose to let the order know when Harry was seriously in trouble... or is life threatening situation the only time he's in serious trouble. Hopefully Tonks can heal him up and stop him cutting himself
char1234 chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
This chapter truly captures what a bad place Harry is in, physically and mentally
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