|Reviews for Alisa III Chronicle: Uniting Foes|
| GreatLight432 chapter 12 . 5/6/2010
*cracks up* You need to write more of these. I see you have some more PS3 fics, so I hope a number of them are comedy like this one. It's good to see the classics get some attention, especially accurate attention like this. You've captured both Mieu and Wren perfectly, and the story itself is a riot. Good show!
| Vicious Pink chapter 11 . 4/28/2010
I've enjoyed "Murder in Shusoran" immensely. I never could believe that the marriage between Rhys and Maia immediately ended the centuries-long feuding between the neighboring Orakian and Layan towns, and I like that this story touches on how it takes more than a joint Layan/Orakian adventure and a marriage to overcome a millennium of prejudice. Very well done.
| Vicious Pink chapter 5 . 4/28/2010
I've seen different theories as to why there are technique shops in Landen, but this is the best explanation I've come across. Kudos for turning something that's effectively a game device into a believable story, and bonus points for including the gems.