|Reviews for Return Trip|
| morgaine98 chapter 20 . 10/4
I love that this story constantly broke the fourth wall and referenced other franchises. Overall, this story was a masterpiece! The plot was great and totally made sense this time, and I think you should really write another Ed fanfic. I suggest where A) Ed and Pride are two entities in one body (Ed's body you dolt.) and B) Crossover with either the Hunger games trilogy or the Divergent trilogy. That would be totally awesome. Can't wait to see that happen!
| LeonCaboose chapter 4 . 7/10
it was good till it was revealed Aang was Al. its just too silly.
| Mysterious Prophetess chapter 3 . 1/17
Was that an intentional Space Balls reference I spotted?
| Rin chapter 8 . 12/22/2014
wtf is this o-o
| calcu22 chapter 20 . 9/29/2014
Finished this story a few days ago and I decided to review it. The Al as Aang is a great idea and I loved seeing Ed and Roy interact with the group in the beginning. Did get a little confusing at times, but it was a nice, funny, read.
| TheHaloFreak chapter 15 . 9/13/2014
Hey I know this story was written ages ago, and has probably finished but...ZUTARA! Alphonse can go hook up with Someone else. Zuko and Katara are meant for each other! Also where's Izumi?
| TheHaloFreak chapter 12 . 9/13/2014
IZUMI! I LOVE IZUMI!
| Actual.Loki chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I was scrolling through a Fullmetal community and I was hooked on this as soon as I saw "Sokka" and "boomerang".
| shadow of eyes chapter 20 . 8/30/2014
| bluesonicblast chapter 15 . 8/15/2014
*seething with anger* HOW DARE U MAKE ED IN DAT HORRIBLE PLAIY
| shadow of eyes chapter 12 . 7/10/2014
Izumi! LMAO! This is Epic!
| bluesonicblast chapter 5 . 6/14/2014
I am utterly confuzzled
| bluesonicblast chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
| bluesonicblast chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Yaaaayz! Everyone iz so happeh!
| Carolina36 chapter 20 . 6/6/2014
So I actually read the story a long time ago and reread it like 2 weeks ago and now I'm reviewing it because I really liked it and although I was really confused with the whole time warp thing, bet besides that it was really good...