Reviews for 21st Birthday Party
laurenbear123 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
One of the best stories I have read! Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed it! :D
otaku-chan chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
está bastate bueno pero trata de escribir sin errores porque en la traduccion no se entiende

is pretty good but try to write without errors because the translation is not understood
Mrs.Jasper Whitlock Hale081896 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
tHIS IS SOOOOO WEET AND I LOVE IT! I WISH IT WAS LONGER BUT YOU DID A GREAT JOB!
afshsisok chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
awwwwwwww that made me smile )
Koxi chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I like the whole story except for the ending it just felt so rushed and very sudden and he did the same thing he did in the movie he told everyone how he feels about her

I was and ok story

I give **out of *****
CBear23 chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
i dont think u shouldn'n have them make up and get married but thats my opinion. I just love Drama- Romance

But good job anyways

CBear23
anter0grade chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
this was amazing! i loved it! you should have more of these dreams. xD

incredibly well-written and it reminded me of this one song; you left me by the maine, especially the first couple of lines.

more please? :)
Tilly Elizabeth Lerman chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
wonderful! carry on writing babe!
StarsAndMoons214 chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
aw that was so good
Sweetie16 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
you should do more. like the wedding. :)
Lyric Medlie chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Loved it! I loved the movie, and i've always wanted to read fanfiction for it, and this was wonderful!

-thanks, love, Lyric
CarlisleAndBella'sLove chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
OMG :D

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER YOU SHOULD DEFINATLY DO MORE OF THIS STORY AND IF YOU NEED IDEAS IF YOU CARRY ON JUST SEND ME A MESSAGE AND I WILL REPLY ASAP !

PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS CAUSE I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT COULD HAPPEN NEXT !
BeastsAndFallenAngels chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
aw. I may have kind of a little bit pretend I was Jess towards the end... (: Im so glad you made me watch it the other day (: You should write more.