Reviews for Come Take a Walk With Me
SianJohn chapter 46 . 7/7/2021
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I loved it.
Elisabeth123 chapter 45 . 2/6/2021
Thanks for such a great story. So enjoyable
Jessterday chapter 12 . 1/16/2021
OMG... this is soooooo Good. I am really enjoying this story! Thank you!
Guest chapter 14 . 7/10/2020
Wow! Exhilarating really! Beautifully written!
twirob chapter 46 . 1/28/2020
thank you so much for completing this AMAZINGLY AWESOME ! story for us ;) I LOVED the changes you did ;) I can't believe that I haven't read this before and I'll be back to read it a lot more in the future ;D
Andaolo chapter 18 . 12/20/2019
Uh-oh, I thought this was just a story of a more-than-usual jealous and possessive Edward but apparently, there is much more... It is all a bit scary as it can go to any direction at this point.
StrawberryFreesia chapter 39 . 11/27/2019
Just a few thoughts…. Will she be healed up again and intact once more as she did her power healing thing again when she was cold and edward was speaking to eleazor… Also the big power burst thing at the end of chapter 39. Also what about having pierced ears? I hope edward sorts all this before her change.
Second they should get her lots of hot water bottles or an electric blanket along with the quilt.
Third i realise you haven't kept completely to character as it's your own story and stuff…. Also stephenie meyers edward would never of peaked at her naked when in the wardrobe…. But i just don't think edward would ever call bella baby. His pet name for her is love and a few times sweetheart. It just feels wrong.
Other then that i love your story and I'm really really enjoying it. Thankyou xxxx
StrawberryFreesia chapter 18 . 11/26/2019
Hopefully bella will see it this way too but i really don't think she can blame the cafeteria accident on edward. I mean it was so indirect... Surely whoever spilled the liquid on the floor that she slipped on is more to blame. To be honest it all was just a huge accident that couldn't really be blamed on anyone.
StrawberryFreesia chapter 14 . 11/26/2019
Just read chapter 14. Okay lots of things i don't understand. Why didn't emmett and Rose and esme and Carlisle etc help more. It should of been easy as pie to protect them all. Secondly did bella's shield have some kind of force that not only forced paul and jake away but her parents too and they got injured? Or did Paul attack them? If he attacked them that goes against all that they are right because they're meant to be protectors of mankind. Also haven't the wolves broken treaty as they have attacked unprovoked. Finally i am so confused by bella's powers. So can she read everyone's mind or just edwards? Is it because of the mate connection... Are they like intrinsically linked?
campyrsm chapter 46 . 11/2/2019
Awesome story! Thank you.
Elisabeth123 chapter 46 . 11/2/2019
Another brilliant story. I love the non human Bella stories so thank you again. Once again I love your writing style, characters and plots. Wonderful!
HappyEndingLover chapter 46 . 9/18/2019
That was a very good story. Thank you for sharing it!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/7/2019
Good start. Enjoying this. Kerrion, I agree with you about guest reviewers. None of them could probably write any story at all. However, it is think coming. Thing is commonly misused.
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 46 . 2/6/2019
Loved this twist on the original! I am going too miss these two!
Kerrion chapter 2 . 1/22/2019
AlSO , THERE IS NOTHING WRONG WITH WRITING IN A DIARY OR JOURNAL ! YOU OBNOXIOUS HAG! .
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