Reviews for Seven Deadly Sins ON HIATUS
Ra9wr chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
More More please! I need more Lavi x Ed!
VivaNewVegas chapter 2 . 12/2/2011
I'm sorry. I have nothing against Yaoi, but you need a beta. Or something to help break your paragraph into a few smaller segments to that people don't suffer a momentary heart attack when seeing the block. Interesting story, good promise in it.
VivaNewVegas chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Hmm, I wonder if there are any FMA DGM stories. Seven deadly sins? Looks interesting. *click* Load... load... load... lo- OH SWEET LORD MY EYES! I'M DYING! AHHHH!

But seriously, get a beta. my heart rate sped up just seeing the block paragraph.
AnimeloverWinry chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
You really sould update this! Its a awesome story so far! I really like how its LavixEdward all I can find is AllenxEdward. But anyway good job! please update soon!
Dark Blue Azure chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
Wow (: this is really good.I hate that allen died though )': LoL pretty please write more! :D I'd appreciate it!
amaya-nights rain chapter 2 . 8/31/2010
XD nice

I love the story too bad you killed Allen though XD
xxYullenxLuckyxx chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
I really love the idea for the story, but there are some things that I think you should fix. In both chapters of this, you fail to put it in paragraph form. Which in some cases people don't like. But all in all I love it so far