Reviews for Kira
chocolatemaltesers chapter 57 . 10/5/2010
you really get a sense for the anxiety here.
chocolatemaltesers chapter 53 . 10/5/2010
awww! .
chocolatemaltesers chapter 49 . 10/5/2010
I really like "Bittersweet metallic revenge." a really good ending line.
chocolatemaltesers chapter 46 . 10/5/2010
I like these metaphors! :)
chocolatemaltesers chapter 41 . 10/5/2010
You know, before reading some of your fanfiction, I really never even thought about Hiten/Suzaku, Hiten/Bankotsu or Hiten/Jakotsu as really viable pairings. You do it really convincingly!
chocolatemaltesers chapter 28 . 10/5/2010
This one reads almost like free verse and that really enhances the conflicting emotions you bring out in the character. yay!
chocolatemaltesers chapter 24 . 10/5/2010
Thats a lot of depth contained in so few words. Really good job :)
chocolatemaltesers chapter 15 . 10/5/2010
awww!
chocolatemaltesers chapter 11 . 10/5/2010
really vivid imagery in this one! yay!
chocolatemaltesers chapter 8 . 10/5/2010
This chapter is so sweet!
chocolatemaltesers chapter 5 . 10/5/2010
I like how these chapters read as short 100 word stories in and of themselves, but have a real story line as well :)
al3221 chapter 19 . 8/5/2010
just wow 3
kirayasha aka kira chapter 59 . 6/22/2010
*giggles* So they've set a date, hunh? ;p
kirayasha aka kira chapter 58 . 6/22/2010
OOOh... I never thought of it that way...*got chills*
kirayasha aka kira chapter 57 . 6/21/2010
OMG... You know, my first instinct is run too when things get like that... But I usually torture myself into staying...;
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