Reviews for An Unlikely Alliance
Guest chapter 9 . 12/24/2012
Brutes and elites are stronger then you think elites have a doble museal strcherand with there armor they could flip a tank with ease. Also all ammo in the unsc have are ap or exploseve so orks would have fire crakkers going off in it or brain blown out ( how small it is) now sorry for spelling and i dont expet u to update and change it but still
Guest chapter 6 . 12/24/2012
Turkus is only a foot taller then 117 johes7 9' space marines are around 8-9 foot then hunters are 12-16 feet tall. Eiltes are about 8-9 foot. So your sizes are off but owell
Jarreditis chapter 16 . 12/8/2011
soooooo gooood!
Deadzepplin chapter 16 . 9/24/2011
This is suspicious
Advicepuppy chapter 10 . 9/7/2011
Wait, what the shit? Samus? This'll be neat. Btw, excellent writing. Reminds me of Ben counter. Very good so far.

Lol Samus in 40k.
Tyranifex chapter 16 . 6/26/2011
I have one problem with this chapter, unless you have toned down the space marine or bettered the Hunter, the Marine should have been able to punch out the Hunters, and they are about the same height as a Neophyte so the Marine would have been taller.
Tomorrow's War chapter 15 . 6/2/2011
Awesome stuff!
Brother of the Moon chapter 15 . 5/20/2011
this review is for this and the previous chapter, I'm glad that Tarkus managed to kill the deamon and released it's hold over Samus and the Chief otherwise they would certainly be dead. overall a nice action paced chapter. I'm somewhat surprised that John took more of a battering than Samus but I'm not complaining.

Well I hope they save Tarkus and I wonder who these guys are? are they Tau or Eldar?

Keep up the good work.

Cheers, Moon
Chris Adair chapter 13 . 4/4/2011
Cool, they've gone crazy. Dark gods whispering in their ears. Tarkus will have to kill them now. More please.
Grimmuald chapter 13 . 10/13/2010
Poor Tarkus, lost on a hostile planet with his two only allies falling to the madness of chaos...ok, where's the force commander when you need him :) Good job though, keep it up
Jarreditis chapter 11 . 10/9/2010
This is for more than just the chapter, but this is a great story! I can't wait for you to continue, samus was an unexpected element but a good one in the end thanks for listening
samurai89 chapter 11 . 10/7/2010
A really awesome story, you drew me straight in. Please keep going, your doing a good job!
Rocketfist chapter 10 . 8/7/2010
wow what's next, commander shepard! awesomeness dude! keep it up!
Mathiasosx chapter 10 . 7/14/2010
I got it right on the second guess it seems. Good fight scene and really enjoyable I look forward to the next update. Keep Writing.
Mathiasosx chapter 8 . 6/26/2010
This is getting more and more interesting. I was leaning towards an Eldar farseer for the third character but now I'm not really sure. looking forward to the next update. Keep writing.
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