|Reviews for Spiral|
| The Fayre Unknown chapter 4 . 4/26/2010
I loved this story. I just wanted you to know that. I really like the foray into Zack's mental state. I usually avoid stories about Zack in the loony bin (in my own little world the Gormogon thing never happened), but I am very impressed with this. It was absolutely depressing, but somehow made me feel better about the whole thing (which is highly illogical, I know). Anyway, great job!
| akghsfghjhjsagjh chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
Interesting ending. It doesn't seem like Zack to tell Hodgins to fuck off. Ignoring Sweets I can see. But the other thing? It's actually quite refreshing. And thank you for the thank you. It's cool to be thanked for reviewing. :D
Good on her to whoever that was that came there and had a go at him. Zack needs to hear it (even though I love him to shreds).
Beautiful... brilliant... SUCCESSFUL. Not that Cam isn't successful but SUCCESSFUL screams Brennan.
I am going to believe it is Brennan. :)
Thank you for a fabulous read.
| akghsfghjhjsagjh chapter 3 . 4/18/2010
| akghsfghjhjsagjh chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
Great chapter. Bit of a jolt with I need to kill myself bit. I like the "The clicketty-clack of Cam's heels as she passes through the lab, eyes locked on the papers in her hand, missing the hopeful smile he sends her way". That was cute.
| cwgirlup chapter 4 . 4/17/2010
That is totally Cam. She would react exactly like that. At least Zack can see some hope now. I really thought he was going to kill himself. (And if anyone could figure out how to off himself in the loony bin, it would be Zack.)
I always wondered why Hodgins doesn't use some of his money to buy Zack's freedom. I know it isn't exactly ethical, but Zack is his best friend, and Hodgins likes to go against 'the man'. Having said that, I have no idea how I'd write it either, so I know where you're coming from :)
| cwgirlup chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Poor Zack :( This totally makes me what to hug him and feed him cookies. And honestly, it kind of makes me what to bitch slap his supposed friends for forgetting about him.
I like the Cam/Zack angle. I only write Zack/Hodgins, but I can see him with Cam. She definitely had the most dramatic reaction to his leaving.
PS: I know what you mean about the reviews. The story I put up last night has been read 225 times, but only had 1 review. Very frustrating.
| akghsfghjhjsagjh chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Aw, This is sad.
And in character. Well done!
Really? That end bit was Zack and Cam? It sounded more like Brennan/Zack.