|Reviews for Damages I: Shock (Carlisle)|
| lol chapter 16 . 4/7
Wow, that was...amazing! I swear, never in my life have I read such a good Bella-first-person-narrator! I was just as if Stephenie Meyer herself wrote this! And all the characters present were so real, so in character, hell, it left me speechless.
Although, I quite frankly still don't understand what the plot has been about. Until chapter 8 or so, nothing has really been happening, apart from conversation (which I undoubtedly appreciated, but there has to be some kind of action, right?).
Anyway, the whole theme was quite interesting and very creative and your writing skills are just exceptional! Chapeau!
| Curious-Brunette13 chapter 16 . 10/23/2016
Love this story. Glad to see more of the family, not just Edward and Bella. I always thought that there should have been more issues and more resolution after New Moon. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.
| Amu4ever chapter 8 . 1/24/2016
Well, your Bella sure got wits :)
| Amu4ever chapter 7 . 1/23/2016
Hmm...I see the inteest in them discussing their past and such..., but nothing is really happening. I found myself skipping a lot this and last chapter. Just reading the more interesting discussion - like over marriage - and leaving the other stuff out.
-sigh- Well, can't be helped I guess...
| Amu4ever chapter 6 . 1/23/2016
Are you really surprised that Bella believed Edwards lies in the forest?
| Amu4ever chapter 4 . 1/22/2016
And gone they are again. Wonder what adventures Sunday holds for her :)
| Amu4ever chapter 3 . 1/22/2016
Please tell me you send them off again...they wouldn't stay, would they? That had so ruin the Carlisle Bella weekend...
| Amu4ever chapter 2 . 1/22/2016
It is true distance does increase the affection felt to someone like Edward...
Oh and Carlisle is one of my favorites too :)
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Aww~! That was cute :)
Oh and I like how good your characterisation is. I like your Edward way more then the canon one and Bellas reactions to him...well, probably because Edward is far away and Bella stood up to him. But it's still a valid point :P
| AHealingRenaissance chapter 3 . 10/8/2015
I am loving this fic :D Makes for great reading while waiting for a 6wk old to fall into deep sleep, too :D
| mommakat chapter 15 . 10/3/2015
I just finished the story and wanted to tell Thank You! You wrote beautifully, made the characters feel like real living people- supernatural elements aside, and created a story that I cannot wait to read the next one.
So again, Thank You!
| sarah999 chapter 3 . 2/12/2015
I reread this story 'just' for the cafeteria scene and feisty Bella "coiled like a snake" around Carlisle. My absolutely favorite parts!
| Honey in the Sunshine chapter 16 . 1/21/2015
Oh my God i loved it! This story is absolutely one of my favourites ever! Now i'm going to read Damages II, but i can't wait for you the part about Jasper, my fave :D Really really beautiful!
| Col. Rage-Shadow Dragon Leader chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
good chapter, I love a hurtBella story where she needs comforting, I also love when she doesn't apologize every other sentence ;)
| twilightromance4ever chapter 16 . 7/18/2014
this was a lovley story! :D