Reviews for About A Boy
Tar-Celebrian chapter 1 . 1/27
I had a great time reading your story (and I think this is my new headcanon about the encounter between Ao and Shisui)!
Your characterization is excellent (grumpy Ao, carefree Shisui and an unexpected alliance) but the best is that your story is full of humor (hair is sacred in Mist :) ). My favorite moment is when Shisui introduce himself as Momoiro. I also enjoyed all the allusions to Itachi and Konoha matters :)
Thanks for sharing!
intoxicatedasphyxiation chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Aww, this was nice. Good work, I appreciate your characterisation of Shisui.
writingpenguin chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This is in a way heart-warming. Nice to know that ninja from other villages just don't go all war on Konoha-nin. I like how you took the fact that Ao said he met Shisui and turned it to something like this. It's brilliant.
KenzoTheGreat chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This... was... awesome. You definitely have a way with words, and this pairing is so refreshing because it's out of the norm and your style made it very appealing.
shaya10 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Love it ! It was really good, well written and I really like the interactions between Shisui and Ao from their fight to their separation - it was funny, with their totally opposite personality! I love the way they talk to each other, how Ao cut almost all of Shisui's hair (xD) and how Shisui remarks about Ao's hair, the way Ao said how he got his Byakugan, when Shisui ask about dango... but my favorite part is at the end when Ao gave the dango to Shisui thinking it was for Shisui's girlfriend, when it was for Itachi hahaha - Shisui's face should have been great to see xD
Tsume Yuki chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Wow, I loved this. I love how you wrote both Shisui and Ao, it was honesty one of the best oneshots/short story whatever's I've ever read, and I love how you put them together.
Thank you for writing this,

Aista chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I love reading about minor characters! Magnificent characterization and fantastic writing.
Colors of Iris chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This is beautiful, emotional writing—the kind that makes you want to laugh and cry at the same time. Sweet, and painful, and happy. Also, I love your portrayal of Ao and Shisui. You've taken two previously minor characters, fleshed them out and breathed life into them. They feel every bit as real as the canon characters.

Thank you for this.
Lucillia chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
That was a cute little story, and I enjoyed reading it.
Stina Whatever chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
THis is a great story, and I really like that Shisui got dango for Itachi
evening's shore chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
The beginning made me laugh, and the end made me cry. A beautiful taste of melancholy, what ifs, and the heartache and joy of a memory.

Love it.
Vaako chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Great fic, very sad, poor shisui... such lost promise :( I like the depth here, look beneath the surface and it's nice and deep ;)
xTsukuyomii chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This was hilarious! I loved the implications that Ao makes about Shisui and Itachi. I also loved the end, when it portrays Ao's thoughts in the future. Great job on this!
The Lady Avaritia chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
WOW! It was fun to read and also kinda sad. I really like your writing style. I actually have a story with Shisui written, if you're interested. It's called Bang the Bass, and I'm rather proud of it. Once again, great story. Keep writing!
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