Reviews for What They Deserved
srhittson chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
Love the story. Wished that really happened
FoxyWombat chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
This is so how it should have been!
Kat Spencer chapter 2 . 4/16/2010
So very sweet. *sigh* would loved to have seen it. They could have come up with a better way to pull Jack back in. They wanted a 'twist'? How about the twist where you let Renee live and she and Jack can be happy? Please 24, that was just poor writing.
k8lyn2002 chapter 2 . 4/13/2010


i HATE the 24 writter's and this is off to great start! :)
elly755 chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
ugh i was soo mad about her dying i threw the pillows at the tv. its good so far im glad she survives in this one.
alittlethingcalledhope chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
:) that's okay, I kinda just got into 24 fics too :P It's good, from the little stuff I know about the characters, I think it was really good.. And a perfect re-write of what happened.. I'm so mad they killed her off, I felt like crying.. Gah, I was so pissed! lol But yeah, you did a great job at fixing this.. So yeah, thanks for sharing, it's great :) ooh, and I'm up for a sequel or somethin :P
xx-crispy-mnms-lover-xx chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
i WISH this could have happened!

i was distraught that they killed renee, like you said it was unnecessary!
Lara Cox chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
I think you did a great job! This is what should have happened. I liked reading your story.
Erin Elisabeth chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
God, I wish it would have worked out like this instead of the writers CRUELY AND UNNECESSARILY killing her!
miscme chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
I definitely like this ending way better than the show. : ) Keep writing! Jack needs a happy ending. They both deserve it.

have a lovely day!

strdstbttrfly chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
I like your story better than what happened. I think I will remember your version rather than the shows. :) Great story!
OTP-Obsessions chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
omg its so good dont stop there...i cant believe that they killed renee off the show! gah keep her alive wolfbones17! keep going ill def read it