Reviews for Rag Doll
AZGirl chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
That conversation between Tony and Senior was intense and a bit heartbreaking! To have your parent basically say they didn't ever want you...wow. Hopefully Gibbs can get through to him soon. Awesome, powerful chapter!
combatcrazy chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Glad to see you back. I missed this story. And you came back with an excellent chapter. Poor Tony is having an anxiety attack I think. At least Gibbs is there to help him. Great job.
Headbanger Rockstar chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Oh my goodness what an intense chapter! All of it combined together to make one big fine mess for our very special agent. :( Poor Tony!

As for what's happening to him? I'd say panic attack, triggered from the lack of sleep, the caffeine pills, and he has lung issues on top of that. Bad combo hehehehehee

But I will *patiently* wait to see what you come up with. :)

Thanks!

HB
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Aw Poor Tony his dad was so wrong to say that. I guess you could say you were a mistake in the heat of the moment. End of our life as we knew it. your mother didn't believe in abortion!

"So you wanted to get rid of me?"

"So I was an accident, huh? You don't say that to your kid no matter how old they are. A mistake, that just about summed him up. No he cant think that way. Hes not a mistake.

Poor Tony was he having a panic attack. Good thing Gibbs was there. He will know hopefully how to help and calm Tony down.
Gabby chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Awww. Jeez. Poor Tony. This was really heartbreaking. Beautifully and subtly written - you really captured and conveyed, well, everything perfectly.
TrishG chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Welcome back and thanks for the update. I can't wait for Gibbs to help Tony.
Madances chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Thank you for the new chapter. You did a good job with it. I hope the next one is just as good. Tracy
scousemuz1k chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Hi doll...

I want cupcakes. Those with the great big curly quiffs of pink buttercream, remember?

Mmm... so Tony thinks all Gibbs will do is think him a coward. He's in a state. Time for the bear to step up, methinks. I hope he gave agent Finn a bollicking for tale-telling - unless of course he was trying to HELP Tony.

I'm still breathless to know more about the little murdered girl, and the rag doll, and I KNOW you've got a helluva lot on your plate, but update soon.

scouse x
Julie250 chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Thanks for another great chapter,it's great to see this story updated and looking forward to reading more soon. Julie xx
amp88 chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Welcome back! This chapter was amazing, and it looks like more hospital drama for Tony!
MADStar529 chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
I was re-reading your story and imagine my surprise wen there's a new chapter up! A good surprise of course! Tony's dad's a real jerk, I can't believe he would say that about his own son and if they weren't ready for a kid what about adoption or something? The other agent was annoying because she was a tattle tale even when there was nothing to tattle about! At the end is he just having a panic attack or is it a side effect of what happend! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
RHMichaud chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Great to have you back to writing again. I almost forgot that this story wasn't finished and now it looks like it will go on longer! Yes! Can't wait to read more. Great writing. Great suspense.
katesari chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
The caffeine pills arent caffeine pills? You're not that cruel to Tony. I know that, so it's just the caffeine pills coupled with adrenaline and exhaustion. Hope he'll be alright again next chapter and hope to read more soon! bye
fairyqueenie chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
Yay an update. :D still loving this can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon, it's great.

Fairy x
Brenny chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
yay Gibbs to the rescue! Can't wait to read what happens next, hope you'll update really soon *g*

Awesome story so far!
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