Reviews for Rag Doll |
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Seleya889 chapter 21 . 3/15/2014 Lovely ending to a lovely story. So many ups and downs. So many emotions! So many heroics from the biggest heroes to the tiniest. I loved every minute of it! It was well worth the wait. Thank you very much! |
katesari chapter 21 . 3/13/2014 Wow, that's some ending! This was a good read! Beautiful that he went and searched out the parents of that girl and went to deliver back the ragdoll. That is good closure! Bye |
NCIS fan chapter 21 . 3/13/2014 Wow. Just wow. What an incredible story. I just found it yesterday, so I got to read the whole thing at once. I can't express my emotions as I read the story, nor my admiration for you as the writer. I hope this gives Tony some closure. He won't ever be the same, but I hope this gives him peace of mind. I look forward to more of your stories in the future. Thank you for this one. |
xenascully chapter 21 . 3/13/2014 Wow I'd all but forgotten about this one! Nice to see it finished :) |
AgentD.6 chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 Wow what a great story! I loved it! |
Jadedlady6 chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 I had quite given up on you ever finishing this story. But I'm so happy that you did. What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I hope will be more future, loving kisses. |
singer-s-lament chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 Oh, Sweetie, that was a fantastic way to end it. |
diana teo chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 Glad you finally gave this a proper ending. Absolutely loved the award ceremony scene, Tony's terse 'Thank you', and especially McGee being equated with a Labrador puppy, lol! And he does, but I don't think he'd appreciate that sentiment... ;) Thank you for an amazing ride. :) Can I look forward to another? ;) |
me 4evaful chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 So just when I was becoming disenchanted with NCIS fanfiction, I suddenly stumbled across this little (or perhaps 'big' would be a better word) piece. This was actually incredible. It was challenging in a way that a lot of great literature is, dealing with a topic that's obviously very close to the bone for a lot of people, and the way you depicted Tony's reactions to everything, and how it was tearing him apart was so in character. At the part where you said that Tony would never make jokes about Catholic school uniforms, that was the point where I think I decided that this is the best NCIS fanfic I've ever read. I'm yet to find anything in the same league as this in the NCIS archive, and very few that I've found elsewhere. And that ending... I couldn't have imagined a better way to finish this story. It was beautifully bittersweet, and it left me with tears in my eyes. I don't cry at films and stories often. (Many people call me heartless because I didn't cry in 'Bambi', and I didn't cry at 'Titanic', which may put the comment about having tears in my eyes into context.) I can't find anything to say with regard to your writing - your characterization was as close to perfect as I think I've ever seen, your style is intelligent yet engaging (feel free to substitute a better word for 'intelligent' there,) and the plot was interesting and thought-provoking. I really can't fault this story. Well done :) |
AgentD.6 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 Finally darting to read your story and it's great so far! |
combatcrazy chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 Awesome ending to an fabulous story. Great job. |
NCIS Fanfiction Addict chapter 20 . 3/11/2014 Love! Can't wait for more! |
NCIS Fanfiction Addict chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 *Folds her hands over her lap.* Yeah right. Gibbs? Sit back and do nothing? What. Ever. Great so far! |
Gibbs4Eva chapter 21 . 3/11/2014 Brilliant story! I loved the serious, dedicated Tony that you portray! Very emotional ending, yet one I could see Tony doing. Thank you. |
RedLindy chapter 21 . 3/10/2014 What a perfect "ending" to an amazing and powerful story. I hope you continue writing fan fic. You suck the reader into your reality with the first chapter and it just gets better after that. |