|Reviews for Shinobi Campfire Story|
| Wild Goose 01 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
That... was pretty darned sweet. Both a deconstruction AND playing straight of ninja myth in the same story. :p
Nice one. The world needs more Kyouya and Shinobu. XD
| ColinatorGX chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Now this was just pure genius. Great stiry. )
| Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Hahaha. Awesome. A great way to play with realities even in a fictional world that actually does have supernatural elements.
| GeshronTyler chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Dare I say it? I find this fic to be... Tarantino like! _
| MissGardenia chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Poor, poor mooks. Generally never good when they get screentime. I mean, most of these guys are scum, anyway...
Also, the Takamachi family is totally supernatural. Ki-users like them aren't normal humans in-universe! Gotta have good genes... (or else I doubt Nanoha would've had as much magical potential as she does).
| hignum chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
why he ends up with Shinobu! T-T why not his childhood fren Elise McGaren? she's prettier than shinobu! but overall, nice story. can maybe Elise n Kyouya? XP
| Person With Many Aliases chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
You may be onto something here. We could use some Triangle Heart fics... Tora Ha... yeh.
Good stuff. Minor reference to Blood and Spirit. It's not bad at all. So yeh. Maybe we should have more Toraha.
| F91 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Very nicely done. I like how you gave just enough insight into the various mooks before they're unceremoniously killed off
| Anon chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
3 D'aww cute... In a morbid kind of way.