Reviews for Need Me
MineFantasy chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
this is such a gr8 story! pls continue...
Raeryn chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
The plot is pretty good, but your grammar and spelling definitely needs improvements. Yes, after every speech, if a new person will speak, it is another paragraph. But it isn't every sentence you have new paragraph. You add a period after every sentence, I'm pretty sure that is obvious logic, and we do not end sentences with "". It's either "." or "?" or "!" and occasionally "," if it is dialogue. "I" or "I'm" and proper nouns, and the first letter of each sentence is capitalized. I recommend proofreading this story again.
ukatoemina chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
awwwwww. That was so cute. Especially Nina's last words. :" xD
QueenoftheCatz chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Awwww! This is so sweet! Great plot!
coobearrocks chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Aww so adorable! :D