Reviews for Need Me
We'rekindacrazylikethat chapter 1 . 5/24
It's so sweet! And sad...
MineFantasy chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
this is such a gr8 story! pls continue...
Raeryn chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
The plot is pretty good, but your grammar and spelling definitely needs improvements. Yes, after every speech, if a new person will speak, it is another paragraph. But it isn't every sentence you have new paragraph. You add a period after every sentence, I'm pretty sure that is obvious logic, and we do not end sentences with "~". It's either "." or "?" or "!" and occasionally "," if it is dialogue. "I" or "I'm" and proper nouns, and the first letter of each sentence is capitalized. I recommend proofreading this story again.
ukatoemina chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
awwwwww. That was so cute. Especially Nina's last words. :" xD
QueenoftheCatz chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Awwww! This is so sweet! Great plot!
coobearrocks chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Aww so adorable! :D