Reviews for A Boy Named Riley
Sand-wolf579 chapter 15 . 5/9/2013
wow, I really enjoyed your story. I hope you don't mind if i critique a bit...
The first being that the age difference between Riley and Ben seems like a little much,
the second, Riley didn't really ever seem to be acting like a ten year old, sometimes acting six, sometimes sixteen, but not really ten. But then, I don't know any ten year old boys who've been through that stuff so...Good job :)
Prongslette94 chapter 15 . 12/8/2011
omg hey that's not fair D:! i want to know what happens to ben D:!
ohgravitysonfire chapter 11 . 4/26/2011
honestly i think this is a great story, but there are soooo many continuity issues!

i can overlook them because i enjoy the story, but for future reference you may want to do a little more proofing before posting

ex: is Riley's father's name Marshall or Andrew?

is Emily's last name Applegate or Appleton?
Storystuff chapter 15 . 3/21/2011
Oh. My. God. :O :D

I read this all in one go today and I was amazed :O It was soooo good! Cannot wait for the next chapter! My heart bleeds for Riley! (And Ben actually) I hardly ever like younger character fics, I never really read them but then I read this one and I almost died of love :D Poor poor Riley and good old Ben is so so so sweet!

Chapter 8 was my fave, it just made me melt into something all squishy inside :D

Cannot wait for the next chapter! Keep writing! !:D
Mezzy-Pen chapter 15 . 2/10/2011
Right it is VERY early in the morning for me, and I have to review now or forget. So i apologise if this doesn't make any sense for half two ramble...

So, i like your style of writing and the storyline, eventhough i had to restort to tissues and explaining to my mother why the hell im crying. your emotions for the characters are good not to ooc or over exgarrated. though their were a fwe grammar and spelling mistakes, not that i blame you we are after all human. but dispite all this how could you leave it like that? espically when your reader needs to know before she does to sleep that they are okay? that was just be on cruel! Despite that fact it is very alluring to go find the sequal to read it! clever traick...

Anyway, hats off to you for a good story, that is good, didn't bore me to death, and kept me on egde for ssome parts! Congrats, and good night )
theweirdworder chapter 15 . 2/5/2011
Aw... I hope Riley's okay. Great chapter; my eyes were glued to the screen the entire time.
theweirdworder chapter 12 . 2/4/2011
Aw, poor Riley. I hope Ben gets him!
theweirdworder chapter 6 . 2/4/2011
Aw... Poor Riley. So sad! Great chapter!
Falling.into.the.sky chapter 15 . 1/2/2011
OMG! This was really good. Poor Riley. And Ben.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 15 . 12/26/2010
WHAT!

NOOOOOOOOOO!

I must know what will happen next!
SeventhTatar chapter 15 . 12/26/2010
OH MY GOD YOU SHOT BEN. *happy dance* explanation now the story will be longer!
DTFan chapter 15 . 12/25/2010
I don't know if you're going to post a new chapter or start a new story but I want to know either way.
ladykale1985 chapter 15 . 12/24/2010
more please...
ruby890 chapter 15 . 12/24/2010
nooooooo to sad. love the fic. plz update.
DELETED ACCOUNT 10123 chapter 15 . 12/24/2010
Loving it, but why'd you shoot Ben?
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