Reviews for Naruto: The Order of the Leaf
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
Dont read New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in youlel
Kyubii359 chapter 1 . 7/13
Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Not sure
amberwolf chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
I definitely think you should continue it.
A'stories10 chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
AWESOME chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
so far the best naruto fan fic i have come across! u should totally continue it!
highlord24 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
yes please! do continue! this is brilliant! love to read more! please update and continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
YOSH!that's was a great start please update soon please please please please!
Google chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Go Rangers apprentice!This is awesome!
mrmrzelda32 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Ya its good just need more ppl in it.
shadeslayer15 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
yes continue the story it sounds great so far.
DragoonMaster11 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Yes, i see potential.
jedielfsorcerer chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Oh hell yes! continue this please! ;p

This is a really good idea!

For some ideas, you might want to look up ranger like in d&d, because it just might give you ideas.
SoulNinjas chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Finally a person who knows about Ranger's Apprentice(besides my sister and some other person in my class i forgot his name). *crys happily* So far as i can see this is probably the first crossover for this series. Bcz there barely any for the Night Angels series or any other books i read too. Anyways this story sounds very interesting and can't wait to see how this will turns out. I can't think of any better teacher then Halt *think maybe the knight/ranger one forgot name again*
herowanabe696 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I like it. please continue this story.
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