Reviews for Chaotic
JeffTheKiller24 chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
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pokefreak2181 chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
The baby pictures! The coma theory! The mood swing! LEAVING ASH IN CHARGE OF TEAM ROCKET! BEST CRACKFIC EVER!XD
pokefreak2181 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Oh my god! This chapter killed me!
Kazlene la Suicine chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
You did such a great job. Everything in this story made me laugh especially when Ash accidentally destroyed Delia's house . I really enjoyed your fanfic
Dannazione chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
I think I rofl-ed enough. You made me die, and resurrect, and then die again. From laughter; that's an accomplishment. It would be tons of fun to read about Ash in charge of Team Rocket, so... Please, more? Cute little please?
BelleD'Opium chapter 2 . 4/16/2011
Hilarious, absolutely loved it! :D
X chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
Okay that is FUNNY! Especially when read after the serious one (Don't Give Me Diamonds). I love your stories with Giovanni and Delia. They're really good, even when crackfic. :D

Funniest line in the chapter: "A mood swing," Giovanni twitched, "you left me because of a mood swing?"

Made me laugh soooo hard. Keep up the good work!

Finessefully,

X
yuugi arry chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
you should do a sequel to this one...heheheheheheh ash would destroy team rocket...heheheheheheheheheheheheheheh
icywarm chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
Uh... cool? Jus kiding. I loved it.
PhinalPhantasy chapter 2 . 4/22/2010
lol Ash looking the same since he was 10 years old. I love how you put that in there...and that they got separated due to a mood swing...but now Ash is in charge of Team Rocket...that's worth a story of it's own I think
pokemaster101 chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
hey, do a sequel of Ash in charge of team rocket because at the end it sounded like a cliffhanger. and since you aren't writing another ch...or maybe you will...or not...but still! :)

oh and if team rocket actually became a sper hero organization in the anime, i will eat my sock and trust me, my sock is way worse then you think it is. -~-
Axletia Rosonetis chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
Aw, mood swings. xD The best way to end a marriage.
PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
ROFL. That was a trip! Poor Jesse, James, and Meowth, they finally win and have their victory taken away half a second later...then the whole town is destroyed by Ash using Mewtwo...though why he's obedient is beyond me. And now Giovanni has to take them all in...just for curiosity's sake, where did this "Giovanni is Ash's father" theory come from initially?
Axletia Rosonetis chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
xD Fwhehehe, full of win. My favorite part was when Mewtwo exploded everything in Pallet...nothing like a psychic overkill to make you crack up.

*sigh* I just love these kinds of family fics...hehehe...
Skaia chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
lol awesome XD