Reviews for Naruto no Hen'itai
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 5/5
Ch 6 . Baku Water Ice modification. Alive.
ivanganev1992 chapter 5 . 5/5
CH 5 Kiba is more useful with energy blasts . The iron skill is weakness for electricity. But he is cocky he needs to humble. Acid is very good but very dangerous if Shino misses but is also useful but risky for his insects . Invincibility and force field especially force field is mental straining but fitting.
Shikamaru Nara is more useful weather controller but I don't know.

Neji Psionic things with his fate thingy or Teleport . Teleport is less useful. Maybe.
Ashleythetiger chapter 7 . 5/27/2012
well enjoyed that while it lasted

sooo glad never saw naruto 4kids...

30min eps taken down to 20mins
Ashleythetiger chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
saw this from read naruto...

oddly imteresting

i know yah said yah stopped with this fic still...
Mr. Cain chapter 7 . 3/23/2012
you really should not have stopped this it is one of your best stories, and the writing wasn't bad it was actually pretty good
cooldownnow chapter 7 . 11/30/2011
you should really start this again its really good
Shamazaki chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
Hmm never mind.
Shamazaki chapter 5 . 8/19/2011
So this is looking to be a good story. Don't make writing this story a chore otherwise you will abandon it, choose what you want to do. If Orochimaru is going to be the main bad guy then you might want to add some other people to keep the rest of the mutants occupied, or you can just make Orochimaru so strong all the mutants have to fight him at once. If you need some one to beta your story PM me.

Here are my answers for that poll of yours:


I think it would be cool if he became the Beast of your Ninja!X-men team: he gets the ability to make alot of tech from stuff, but ends up in the body of a were-wolf.


The Acid Generation thing would be the most useful of the two options, and it works well with his bug ablities (the bugs carry acid to the target) or the acid could end up killing all the bugs inside of him, you never know.


Light manipulation for the irony


I would go with Precognition but that would mean that he would stick to his Fate speaches and that just pisses me off, so i vote Psionic Weapons.

I think you should limit the mutations to the rookie 9 team Gai. It's already hard to give 12 people enough screen time, don't make it harder.
Peliaos chapter 7 . 7/3/2011
dammit, how could you stop this fic, it's loads better than most of the X-men/X-men shoot off & Naruto X-overs i've seen. btw, origninally u where going to give Sasuke magnetism/metal manipulation like Magneto(which would have been really haxed when you think about it) but you changed it to teramancy like Dominikos Ioannis Petrakis/Lance Alvers(if u go by X-men evo version) aka Avalanche.
yukicrewger2 chapter 7 . 6/29/2011
Naruto - Mystique

Sasuke - either Magnito or Professor X

Sakura - Shadow Cat

Ino - Jean Grey

and why did you end it so soon? It was just starting to get interesting... *pouts*
LOVEPOINT33 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
"Well, sir, it would appear that, very recently, his DNA has undergone quite a few changes. It appears to be much more malleable, able to change into other shapes quite easily. This would seem to be the cause for the strangeā€¦ transformations that you informed me of." Sarutobi nodded calmly.

wolfey141 chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
I am not sure bout sasuke but are youmaking sakura like kitty pride? and maybe sasuke is goin to be like gambit? I mean I think that would fit he always did like blowing things up with fire
M4 Sherman chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
This is a interesting story. I have never read one where Naruto turns into a fox through mutation. you should continue beyond akatsuki.
dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 7 . 8/13/2010
well don't just give up man people are so pathetic these days they get a little discouraged with their writing or get a bit of writers block & they quit. this is cool just take some time ask for suggestions & keep trudging along if its really so bad to you then just rewrite it. i'd be glad to give suggestions for powers or anything else maybe instead of giving it up look for someone to work with you on it.
adamthm chapter 7 . 8/5/2010
I loved your story and i guess i found it after you stopped writing but i thought you should know, i'll admit that it's not the best written story that i've ever read but it was certainly compelling. You have an amazing talent that may one day or already have grown into something beautiful. Please don't describe something you've written as sucking.

Thank you for the story.
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