|Reviews for Something Scary|
| OriksGaming chapter 6 . 2/13
Nagato isn't "controlling" Pein, you idiot. Nagato is Pein. Pein wouldn't exist if Nagato hadn't cracked and gone all delusional psycho, believing himself a god and deserving a scarier name. The whole point of a backstory to each of the villains is that they don't just randomly become villains one day, there's always reasons and circumstances, which you should understand, having plotted out Naruto's circumstances reasonably, even if the mobs were a bit far fetched and unrealistic, considering Naruto most likely had an Elite ANBU guard when he was younger. In canon, Itachi is just a good guy pretending to be a bad guy, and he was tricked by Danzo and Madara into believing that he was making a heroic sacrifice. He was a genius, and ultimately a good guy in the end, but he supposedly just didn't care about the innocents in the equation or didn't try to save them. I don't know which is better; The random stupidity or the common ninja callousness. But he wasn't deep down a bad guy like you're heavily implying. The whole point of the Juubi was to get rid of the mystery. Mysteries are made to be solved, and he was bringing the series to an end, so he let the mystery be solved. You have so many qualms with the show, but they're mostly completely unreasonable, and you haven't really bothered to think anything through. Your story itself was boring from the get go due to the major morality issues making it impossible to connect with the characters. Oh look, he blew up a city full of innocents because he couldn't get the tree exercise down. But that's okay, because he's still a massive dick and we should really empathize with our "hero." Aww, Jiraiya's here for you - you cute little cuddly mass murderer.
| OriksGaming chapter 5 . 2/13
I dunno, I feel like Jiraiya should have put him in enough chakra restraints he couldn't use Kyuubi's chakra and then killed him years ago. Yeah yeah, Naruto's a badass in this fan fiction - Whatever. He's also a remorseless mass murderer and a complete dick. I wish he was dead more and more the further I read.
| dloold87 chapter 21 . 2/7
totally need to update.
| ShadowDragonOfDestruction chapter 21 . 1/5
I just read all your chapters and OMG! Great work in all of it! All the stuff going on KS amazing and can't wait till the next chapter comes out! And the sanbi seems it's going to join the snow as well!
Great job once more!
| I was thinking chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
This is a great story but you killed Kakashi
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/8/2015
You're ending the story like this?
| GEDOMAZO10TAILS chapter 5 . 5/8/2015
Okay, I have to know, what is that from? Because have been searching, and you'd think something that uniquely phrased would be easy to find.
| AMINA chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
| Annoy mouse chapter 10 . 1/6/2015
Evil laughter. Oh so very much evil laughter. Maybe even some cackling too.
| sky lord 1990 chapter 21 . 12/2/2014
bad idea as alucard said those how dare inpesanit the dead are juged fit to join thier ranks
| Sunshine0235 chapter 21 . 9/21/2014
The best kyuubi as naruto type fanfics I have ever read, and I've read a lot of them. Truely a great work.
| grimmich chapter 12 . 7/31/2014
... did he have naruto's permission to teach the fighting style to Kiba? if not isn't that being disrespectful in Naruto's eyes I mean jiraiya taught his personal style to a weak inferior being...
| grimmich chapter 9 . 7/31/2014
... that is just soooo not even near fair! it was three against one! if it had been one on one and all they were fresh for every fight Naruto would have sooo kicked all of their asses! those fucking cheaters!
| Im Not Itachi chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
I like this story, but no amount of mental retardation would allow someone to put a two year old in an apartment by themselves. I'm also pretty sure you would kill a two year old if an adult kicked it in the head... once. They wouldn't even be tall enough to reach anything food related, let alone pay for it or hunt for food. They're two years old. Make him eight or something. It's still highly unrealistic, but at least you could explain it.
| TheZeitgeist chapter 21 . 7/14/2014