Reviews for What If?
maxking chapter 2 . 5/16
He should be first
Guest chapter 20 . 4/29
wow. amazing
Quaziemoto79 chapter 13 . 4/22
Semipro Fi
charliephillips1512 chapter 20 . 4/12
Need a sequal
gryphindoros chapter 19 . 4/8
bruh he has "died" like 4 times and thats doesnt work
gryphindoros chapter 9 . 4/8
it is hermoine's fault she should be guilty you dont walk into battle pregnant and expect to walk out of it so. and not telling harry another her fault all thebguilt is well placed on her shoulders
salvadorsuarez387 chapter 11 . 1/23
Hermione is most definitely more attractive than ginny. From book one i was sure that the main pairing in canon would be Harry and Hermione,, or Luna. When She paired Ron with Hermione i was shocked. How could such a smart and loyal girl fall for a MoRon and disloyal person like RW… made me dislike the last books and regret the monsy i spent on them. What a complete let down, to what i tjought was an awesome story.
Thank you for this story and thank you for your service.
FrostyBehemoth chapter 3 . 1/21
Yeah, just no. This chaoter just fucking ruined it. Why get Dumbledore of all people and say he didn't react in time. Or even have his wand out in the first place. Fuck. thanks.

it was half decent while it lasted. try to think up a better excuse next time.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/29/2023
A fucking master piece
Teika Shenjo chapter 4 . 12/26/2023
the impact of Cedric's death and the ripple effects it has too are lost since he is still alive, and i would think with more help and training from hermione Harry wouldn't be in a weaker position
Teika Shenjo chapter 4 . 12/26/2023
its feels like Fleur was just written out of the story even the events which led her and harry to be friends, odd choice
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 10/23/2023
Foreplay would have reduced her pain and helped them enjoy themselves more.
mandorakat chapter 8 . 7/10/2023
16 year old Hermione would not be excited about being pregnant. no girl would, unless she was unstable. and Harry is only 15. A 15 year old father. that's sick man, not romantic. they haven't even had childhoods yet.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2023
Good job picking Harry, never second best.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/4/2023
Beyond stupid. This writer is a moron.
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