| Reviews for What If? |
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   sableye chapter 4 . 4/17/2010 This chapter was very good. It was good that Harry had a good holiday by staying at the Grangers with Hermione. It was very good that Sirius warned about what Dumbledore is trying to do. It will be exciting when Harry proposes to Hermione. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| TsukiyoTenshi chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 Well, this certainly puts a twist in things, now doesn't it? UPDATE! |
| DarkHeart81 chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 I'd say I feel sorry for what happened to Ron but then I'd be lying. lol Was interesting having Harry meet Godric. Though I don't get how Godric could have been to Kings Cross before, let alone seen the Hogwarts Express, as the station didn't open until 1852. Which is long after Godric would have died. |
| Booklvr.Annie chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 Great chapter, the killing curse was unexpected lol. Can't wait for the next update. |
| DriftWood1965 chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 How did Harry survive the killing curse before Voldemort took his blood to anchor him? |
| Xmen583 chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 Great Story Update Soon |
| agnar chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 You were doing fine until you hit the imperioused ron scene, then you lost me. ron, imperioused or not, could in no way cast half the spells you had him casting. he doesn't have the knowledge OR magical power. You also had dumbledore and others come running up to 'help' without wands in hand? And a silver shield that absorbs a killing curse? It's unblockable by magic shields. Only physical stuff stops it, rock, metal... Sorry, not trying to be harsh, but the story had promise until that scene. |
| badkidoh chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 good chapter. |
| dougal74 chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 A good chapter...I'm curious, why wasn't there any mention in the press about Harry surving a second killing curse, especially as Malfoy was witness to his resurection or Skeeter posibly hidden in beetle form. Also, what happened to Ron...yes he was under the imperius curse, but there still must have been something happen to him after...yet it wasn't discussed. Even, though he was under the imperius he still seemed to enjoy it too much and wasn't trying to fight the curse once. Also, his hatred of Harry must have been such that he was able to perform those two curses...as 'fake' Moody pointed out they could've all sent the killing curse at him and he wouldn't have felt a thing. |
| 120991ln chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 CONTINUE LOVING IT |
| sableye chapter 3 . 4/17/2010 This chapter was very good. It was good that Harry met Hermione's parents. It was good that Harry is loyal to Hermione like willing to defend her when the going gets tough. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| zeropolis79 chapter 2 . 4/16/2010 Very good stuff! The Ron bashing is good, and not over the top.. Glad to see Malfoy get what's coming to him. |
| quindich chapter 2 . 4/16/2010 a |
| BlackPhoenixMage chapter 2 . 4/15/2010 Actually rather impressed with this beginning. Similar formatt to other Harry/Hermione 4th year stories, but at the same time follows a rather different approach. Good development. So far, what i have read is really good. |
| jessirose85 chapter 2 . 4/15/2010 Fantastic chapter...I love how Fred and George hex Ron before he can hex Harry x More soon please xx |