I like this, can't wait for more.

Another great chapter.

CONTINUE LOVING IT TOTALLY

Awesome story so far, I LOVE it! :) Very Romantic and Funny! I especially love how you started 4th year, before the ball! :) You write Harry and Hermione really Wonderfully! They're SO cute! :) Again, Awesome start and please keep up the Awesome work! :) Thanks for sharing!

Take Care, Amber :)

This was an awesome chapter. You updated after I had favorited the storythis morning so it was cool to get an extra chapter today. Keep up the good work!

I loved the duel with Malfoy. He truly needs to be humiliated and humbled.

It's good that the gillyweed wasn't stolen from Snape (someone else who should be humbled. He struts around Hogwarts in the manner that he claims James Potter did).

I was disappointed that Harry was awarded second place just like in canon, especially since his hostage surfaced first.

Good chapter. Though there were a few typos, including referring to Harry as Naruto at one point. lol Also, I find it hard to believe that Harry, who would easily be the fastest underwater given the webbed hands and feet, was slowed down so much by the grindylows, that he returned last. This is even harder to believe seeing as he was the first to reach the hostages.

I noticed something in ur story and that was this line: "Naruto turned and saw the sneering face of Draco Malfoy." in this 2nd chapter. It confused me and I was hoping U could help me understand. Other than that it was a relatively wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

This chapter was very good.

It was very funny that Fred and George played a prank on ron by using the Leg-Binding curse and the tongue charm.

It was good that Harry and Hermione were having romance with each other.

Keep up the good work.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

what going to happen next

AWESOME STORY! i love it! update soon!

This is quoted directly from your story: "Naruto turned and saw the sneering face of Draco Malfoy." Naruto? Really?

Good so far. Are you planning to continue the story into fifth year and beyond or just keep it constrained to fourth year? You're going to have to find a reason for Krum to talk to Harry, or else nobody will be able to witness Crouch Sr's appearance by the forest. Since "Moody" didn't take the map this time, they could have some fun with it, particulary with discovering a certain beetle and the oddity of 2 Crouches...

Great chapter, I'm really liking this story.

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I liked this a lot. But then I almost always enjoy a fic where Harry and Hermione go to the Yule Ball together. :) I hope there's more of this to follow. I can't see Ron leaving well enough alone and is sure to raise a fuss the next day.