Reviews for The Game Control
HekkuShun chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Omg that was just too cute! You should definitely make another one like this, the ones where it just makes you crave for something more! LIKE THIS ONE! it's too cute!
Deathly Noted chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Aw cute. :D
anonymousXandrogynous chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
i was just going through my favorites list and i re-read this, it made me smile, its just so cute XD

amazing work and definitly keep writing!

DeathNotes-Matt-Chan chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Aww poor Matt XD Mello is always so meana nd demanding
xxxDuckiexxx chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Oh! I thought that story was very cute. It was a splendid idea, even though you could have written more details and such.

I did not read this story with my critical eye, that's probably why I enjoyed so much! :3 You might have to check the grammar and spelling ( but, seriously, I never do that to my own stories, so I shouldn't say anything!)

I LOVED the idea! And your writing style is cute! But, I think you can develop even further! KEEP ON WRITING!