|Reviews for My Death It is Yours|
| Emerald-Kisses chapter 6 . 8/16/2011
So far I'm really liking this, although I found it moving a bit too fast for my liking. But, you're doing it well enough, so I'm really enjoying this fic.
I just wanted to make a quick comment in that I was a bit surprised/disappointed that you have Ziva not knowing was hummus was. Hummus is a daily staple in Israel and, given that Ziva was born and raised in Israel - and an avid falafel eater - , she would definitely know what hummus was. It kinda just bugged me a bit, given that I'm bit of an OCD-nitpicky NCIS fan, lol.
But really, aside from that little, itty bitty thing, everything's great, and I plan on reading the rest of this! Good job!
| Hannelovestiva chapter 8 . 1/26/2011
I like how you ended it.. that she finally was able to say the words he wanted/needed to her..
Good work - great story.. :-)
Look forward to more stories from you..
| Hannelovestiva chapter 6 . 1/5/2011
I hope she gives him her heart, soon.
Really like this story.. please update soon.. you're doing one hell of a good job.. great writing, the flow of the story and the linear is good.. :)
| DiNUTZzo chapter 6 . 12/16/2010
I thought this was the happy chapter but then the angst at the end. This is good please update
| Betherzz chapter 6 . 12/14/2010
it was a great chapter right up to the last few paragraphs... i am disappointed in ziva, she just hurt him more than anything with her actions, she could have said not yet or no but she just did the cold heartless mossad assasian bitch thing and hurt him and ran, thats just all sorts of effed up if you ask me... cant wait to see what happens next... her hurting him, him being hurt probably will say some things he will regret later, and guess what? the 2 of them are stuck in that safe house, i dont see this ending well and i see gibbs getting a call maybe even fornell because of neighbors calling for a domestic dispute and cops assuming a domestic violence call and all sorts of shit gonna hit the fan, all those people in that building are under protective custody and getting those 2 in an argument under those circumstances won't end well for anyone
| Gladius Grim chapter 6 . 12/14/2010
Well 1 step forward and 2 steps back. Tony will have to be patient take it slow or risk losing her.
| heidimillett3 chapter 5 . 11/23/2010
is there more.
does she say yea to him?
| greengirl82 chapter 5 . 10/8/2010
awesome story! hope you update soon. :)
| Betherzz chapter 5 . 10/6/2010
good chapter... cant wait to see what comes next
| BnBfanatic chapter 4 . 9/9/2010
Love the story but so far I don't see any gore, much actual violence or sex. Is all of that coming in later chapters? I also don't see why the killer/stalker would rig a trip wire at a point of the house where Tony would just get bruises and nothing more. Would love to see more danger and lovin' :-)
| rachelahavah chapter 4 . 9/8/2010
"Everything you're willing to offer, I'm more than willing to take"-GREAT line!
| Betherzz chapter 4 . 9/8/2010
good chapter ;) just wonder if shes gonna run with that give me your heart deal... shes not one to share feelings and emotions nor show them, and i kinda wonder if shes going to run with him asking for everything from her... shocked he didnt just lay it all out there for her to begin with... the whole i love you or i have been in love with you since the day you walked in the bullpen and slouched all provacatively and you asked me if i was having phone sex... or maybe it was wwhen she shared the thing about her little sister outside that hotel in the rain and shared coffee and pizza... hes grown up a lot since he met her, and hes not the same guy he used to be and hes asking her for her heart ;) really great story so far, cant wait to see what comes next
| DiNUTZzo chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
Oooh! An excellent cliffhanger please update soon!
| Betherzz chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
good chapter, i cant wait to see what comes next
| KoteDiM chapter 2 . 7/9/2010
Super nice story like it
Keep up the good work!