Reviews for Torment
lone wolf chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
great story but come on
man thats it? its not long enough
nobadwriting chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I thought this fanfic was excellent! It could easily go right along with the movie. Keep up the good work.
SALJStella chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
This was really good! :) It really felt like we were inside of Mort's adorably sick mind! Especially the parts where you described his writer's block, because that's exactly how it feels. Damn cursor... XD And the narration was awesome. In fact, everything was awesome! Keep it up! _
sylvie-morose chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
...Why haven't you continued this? It's... oh, you just published it. Sorry for the weird... thing...

But yeah, it's good! Please continue; it's stories with this good writing, spelling, the plot about to come into play... I love this movie, and I just you're doing it justice. Continue, please! Oh wait, I just said that. Um... A few punctuation issues, talking about the sticky hand (there should be a comma after blue) but any criticism I have right now is mostly nitpicking.

Yeah. I'm paying attention to this story, you can bet.