|Reviews for A Time To Fight|
| Pineapple Angel 14 chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
GAH! You can't end like that! I don't DO cliffhangers! (although every chapter of every story i write has a cliff...) I can't be left hanging at: "there is no denying it. Steve was murdered" NO! You can't leave me like that!
| Pineapple Angel 14 chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
Ouch...that's really sad.. I like story quality, involving Steve's death and Jaime and Oscar's anguish, but...there are a couple of things I'd have done differently...like shown Steve's death, or at least describe more of what happened. AND, when Oscar tells Jaime, he seems to just say it right out...rather than beating around the bush, or asking her to sit down, or something like that...it seems odd that he'd just come in, greet her, and just say, "Babe, Steve was killed two days ago...Sorry...I know it's hard, but can you come help me tell his parents?" I dunno...ANYWAY, I'm not being negative! I really like this story, so far!
| pereirandrea chapter 3 . 4/20/2010
Great story! Keep going!
Make her discover a new reason to live... and protect her from the killer...
I'm waiting for the next chapter... Who's the murderer? I'm curious!
| bionic4ever chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
What a great beginning. Very vivid - well done! I'll be looking forward to more.