Reviews for Give Up
GrapeWhiz chapter 2 . 4/30/2012
Good plot carry on please. Check ya grammar before u um publish it
beck-iibabe chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
MzPearlz chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
YAY but then again something a little harsher might be a lil bit more stress releaving x3
MzPearlz chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
instead of tryin to kiss him, shoulda slapped tha taste outta his mouth. how he gunna do that...and on her BIRTHDAY too..thats messed ups..
ellyjane chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
The grammar sucks. And it's all over the place. Write in proper sentences but nice plot. :D
MITHMITHMYTHMYTH chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Um, sorry, but the grammar sucks. But I like the plot and everything. Just work on the grammar. :)
Velvet Aura chapter 2 . 5/17/2010
It's good. :) Please do write more.