|Reviews for The Fame Monster|
| Team Peeta Mellark chapter 19 . 10/15/2015
This ending makes no sense, it's Seth's own fault that he did not complete his photography dream and not because of his relationship with Jacob. They could have totally been together and Seth could have gone out looking for a photography job like he should have done in the first place. So this ending sucks and does not go along with the story, since Seth and Jacobs relationship was great for the most part other than Seth being insecure of Jacobs love which he shouldn't have been.
| rourkerae chapter 19 . 1/23/2015
I'm actually dead :'( you mention a second a/n and there isn't one, and the only reason I'm still alive, the only reason for my existence is to know whether there is a sequel :((((
| igee778 chapter 19 . 3/26/2014
It was kinda weird how Seth was completely unaffected by rape. But the story was good, I'd be cool to have a sequel though like, how he gets his life together and gets his photography career and maybe finds a new love hehe. It can show how he matures kind of. (Even without the romance I'd still be Good lol)
| Ridge chapter 19 . 4/6/2013
Definitely not the ending everybody wants to read but it's different and I liked it, happy endings are cool but there just over rated now.
Loved reading this story, :D ..
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/3/2013
This is confusing. You made no point besides saying that Seth came to New York for his photography. It's not like he drifted out of it because he became so consumed with Jacob. I knew exactly what you were going to do when Seth made that promise about leaving Jake if he ever cheated. I don't know what to say. In my opinion, you did not do this story justice. It was set up well to be a nice, short fanfic about to boys madly in love. You tried to make it realistic- but aren't you forgetting that sometimes things do work out? That even despite all the shit life puts us through that we find a way to forgive and be happy.
| DarknessOnTheWall chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
I have read this and while it is a excellent story, it breaks this sites TOS on two counts one you are not allowed to use song lyrics outside the public domain and two there is MA content in here and this site doesn't allow it. Please fix these things or you may get reported one day...
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Alright, so while I was admittidly upset with your story ending I finally found a way to be happy with it! I heard the song "Starts With Goodbye" by Carrie Underwood and it relates almost PERFECTLY with this story! I'm finally at peace with the ending of this story and I can reason with your logic for the end of this story! (In my opinion stories aren't really made to have concrete logic, just to unleash your imagination, but vampires and werewolves dont exsist in the first place right?). I guess its just in my nature to wanna see people fall in love and have a happily ever after, cause I want that to be ME one day. But I know sometimes I just gotta grab life by the horns and take fate into my own hands. So i LOVED this story, accept the ending, and so I'm pretty much happy.
Just Another Reviewer,
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/13/2013
I agree with you that there's not always a happy ending, but thats kinda the whole reason that I read FanFiction: sometimes its good to be cliche if it means that you can just escape reality for a little while. Sometimes I like it when there isn't a happy ending, but in this case I didn't. Seth and Jacob were just so happy together, and Seth took his anger and hurt out by ending his relationship with Jacob, instead of confronting the people who really deserved his anger: Edward, Alice, and James! I think that Seth fails to realize that the whole situation with the drugs and Jacob having to avoid going public with him really hurt Jacobs just as much as it hurt him, probably even more. I really hated the ending but I don't hate you or the rest of the story (I'm even starting to read one of your other stories now :) ps: I LOVE IT!). If you really did do a sequel (i hope so!) I want Seth to realize that you can be independent AND be in a relationship with the person you love (long-distance relationship, maybe?).
Just Another Reviewer,
Ps: On the other hand I do agree that sometimes you have to let go and follow your dreams. I just hope that Seth doesn't regret letting Jacob go. And I wanted to PUNCH Leah when she told Seth what to do with his relationship! Go away Leah, you already have your perfect ending! Let Seth have some happiness too! Anyway I just wanted Seth AND Jacob to be happy in the end. If they ARE happy in your sequel, then I can live happily with this ending :D
PPS: This chick is ALSO a Little Monster! Loved the Lady Gaga excerpts!
| Kukiko-Rei chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
| NightmareHuntress chapter 20 . 1/19/2012
Wow...the story was great! I loved it! So original and it was captivating from the start until the end. I really liked Alice's personality and the crazy stuff she did while under the influence of a drug problem. I am glad that she was checked into rehab and not left to destroy herself from addiction. Drugs Are Bad! LOL.
Personally I think that you don't actually need to write a sequel if you can't be bothered to do so. The fic fit Lady GaGa's 'Bad Romance' perfectly and the ending was satisfying enough. IF you choose to write a sequel, I'll adore it too-I'm sure. BUT the ending was kinda realistic and it leaves much to the reader's imagination. Not everyone gets the 'fairy tale' love that they wish for and a lot of relationships do turn out sour.
I'm assuming that Jake was Seth's first love, but I think that Seth (in a more realistic sense) should be too traumatized to want ANY relationship with another man for a while. I think that Jake was too pushy in the end and that he should of realized that Seth WAS a victim and needed to recover!
*everyone: STOP BEING MEAN!* Sorry, sorry. One more bit of criticism:
Seth was victimized and blamed himself for the actions of another, he said so in the hospital. As do many in the aftermath of the the situation that he was put in. So why doesn't anyone realize this and get him help? Whatever, it's your story and you are the one who is writing it, so I really don't have the right to be mean.
Quick summary: Loved the story. Loved the characters. Loved your style of writing. Loved the ending. Sequel would be cool, but not necessary. Need to suss out plot a little better, but was still awesome!
| Dr.SephirothOWA chapter 5 . 1/13/2012
Continuing to be just as great as the first chapters, love how you're using every character, very imaginative. Looking forward to more!
| Dr.SephirothOWA chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
I love your style of writing, it draws complete attention to the story. Awesome!
| Dr.SephirothOWA chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I am loving the idea behind this story, excited about reading the rest!
| zuzu1991 chapter 18 . 12/24/2011
Omg really I cant beleave u ugh I dont know if I can continue reading this I just dont know I really ugh y just y I really liked them together
| zuzu1991 chapter 14 . 12/24/2011
Omg I loved this one so much I ive turned on the lady gaga when I seen the name of this ch and btw its all so one of my faves from her fame monster cd lol oh and the other chapters are also really go too