Reviews for Fairytale
PrincessDilemma chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Written well. I'm so glad this didn't happen but it gave me lots of food for thught.

That gave me goosebumps, the kind where something is so sad or scary that you go cold.

Thank the Gods that that didn't happen, because it would have been so sad and its so scary just thinking of it happening.

Try putting little more emotion into it.

Cheers xoxo
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Awesome! I like it. It's amazing what can slip away in the blink of an eye.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
im glad this didn't happen
CountryGrl chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Oh, that's so sad...but really well-written. Poor Amy, poor Eleven...(I like Fiona though, she's fun.) This could easily have happened...glad it didn't though. Good job!