Reviews for Harry Potter and the Wish of Life
Mills2345 chapter 38 . 9/19
Finished it in less than a day as always! I've missed your amazing writing and imagination and I really really hope you get around to finishing! Mills xx
Mills2345 chapter 2 . 9/18
I seem to be very lucky that whenever I choose to re-read this, you've decided to revisit it! I can't wait to read it again, I think this must be the third or fourth time and I'm also so excited for the final chapters! Mills xx
Lightningscar chapter 2 . 9/13
Good chappie :)
Chuckled quite a bit at Harry's "A...Angel?" And Lily's reaction of course, calling him Harry-Bear XD

Though, can't blame him for staring, blinking and then dry heaving XD Would probably have reacted the same way if I was in his shoes... or hexed and cursed whoever was setting me up for such a crude prank to the hell and back so that I could send the jerk back to Hell one more time. And doubt Lily would appreciate her son firing hexes at her XD

Smiled a lot during the interaction with Hedwig... loved seeing Harry so exuberant... so childlike :)
But my smile turned into full-blown laughter when poor confused Hedwig slammed her beak into Harry's arm... good way to tell him he wasn't dreaming XD

Interesting and good foreboding detail with him still having the scar.

*scratches head* Eh, I guess it is because of it being Lily scolding him that he grows alarmed and causes him to stumble over his words? Then again, I imagine that having his parents around for the first time, he would want to please them as much as possible.

Loved Lily being all concerned about Harry's worry about his dad's "nonsense' regarding that letter... I imagine Harry must have felt terribly confused about that. XD
A Prefect... well, I guess most reading the original books expected that. And I think if his parents had lived, and some of the craziness that is Harry's life hadn't happened, he might have become a Prefect. And I think James is secretely proud XD

Once again, nice seeing him being so exuberant like a kid turning 15 should be :)

Good reaction to seeing a redhead who definitely wasn't Ron in his room :)

Will review chapter 3 sometime during the next few days.

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar chapter 1 . 9/10
Heyo there. Lightningscar here. I have recently gotten interested in HP fanfics again, and for some reason, I decided to read this story again. :) This time, I will try leaving a review for every chapter, so let's see how it goes :)

Always somewhat heartening and disheartening to hear that that all Harry ever wanted was being like a normal kid with parents to seek comfort in when things go wrong. And it was definitely disheartening and saddening he entertained the notion of him having died alongside James and Lily would have been better for him :(

About him reading about missing persons in the paper and unexplained attacks: Eh, if memory doesn't fail, Voldemort and his Death Eaters lay low at this point of time, not wanting to draw unwanted attention as the Ministry was ignoring the warnings given by Dumbledore and Harry. But that is just minor nitpicking, and as I don't remember when "OoTP" came out, nothing to worry about :)

Interesting wish he made... or rather, the emotions behind it:
wished desperately, the events of the year - past
wished miserably feeling the loneliness and yawning future stretch out before him - future
wished hopefully, a child's heart still present - present
3- a powerful magic number

That is a lot to cry for, Harry. :( You really think you have the world on your shoulders, don't you?

So, the deities/fates or whatever.
Black hair - Future. Blonde - Present. Redhead - Past... is going to be a pain remembering that.
But quite funny seeing the deities of time argue XD
Plus, really liked this formulation: The Past was rewritten, the Present changed, and the Future rerouted.

Hehe. At one point, he is still a normal teen: Trying to ignore adults who wants to rouse you from bed. XD
But I can imagine his shock, being kissed on his forehead. And then came the ultimate shock, his mother being alive. And now I have the image of him gaping like a fish out of water XD Though, considering one of the alternatives (him screaming bloody murder) you chose the funnier one XD

That is all for now, will try giving a review to chapter 2 tomorrow.

Yours sincerely,


PS: Hope you are the type who replies to reviews. XD
ChoyofBonk chapter 38 . 8/16
This fanfiction is a work of art.. Seriously, it's amazing!
Guest chapter 38 . 8/10
Please finish! Loving it so far!
Milliza chapter 38 . 5/9
I think this is turning out to be a wonderful story! Very fun and exciting, especially now with the horcrux hunting going underway. Masterfully done! Continue whenever you have the time. Many thanks :)
Ari Black-18 chapter 38 . 5/3
Love it
Please continue
San chapter 38 . 5/3
Would you write Ginny like this childdish stupid girl in love with harry or she will show her real self in any point of the story?(or at least her bravery or loyalty to her friends and family)
It a really great story and u hope you continue it
nikkiRiddle chapter 38 . 5/2
LAST FIVE CHAPTERS, I can't wait for the next update
ur story is amazing and I love the fact that Harry is still Ethan's brother but also our Harry at the same time.
All through the fic I have loved every moment of it and I totally agree with your thoughts on Ginny - I didn't really mind her in the books but she admits that she never got over her FANGIRL crush on Harry
nintschibintschi chapter 38 . 4/8
it is really an amazing story glad that i found it and i love draco and ethan
thanks for writing it hope you update soon
Hummingbird11 chapter 38 . 4/6
Great fic! I enjoyed reading this. Hope to see another update from you!
Love Nick Jonas chapter 38 . 3/29
please update soon
darkdestiney2000 chapter 38 . 2/21
I really like the relationship between James and Harry. When I read the books, I can't help but think that he would be protective over Harry. Nice job!
flynsqrrl chapter 38 . 2/4
This is such an interesting take on the "living potter parents" plot. I like the changes in the characters you've made and I enjoy the way you've handled Harry having a brother. Hope things are going well for you and I can't wait until the next chapter!
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