|Reviews for Human Deities!|
| MKW chapter 4 . 4/15/2010
I started reading Sailor Kids when you first posted and all I can say is that I lost interest. Try shortening some things I mean you have great detail but it's too much.
It's hard to focus on what is there. And where your story is going.
| Rukangel chapter 3 . 4/15/2010
lol oh i know how you feel and to be like me that you write and then your like wtf did i write? and get frustrated because you have to make yourself go back to when you write it to understand what exacly were you writing and continue it with out making more ideas pass you by and start writing with out knowing in the end you have more info to look for and a lot more to do ... yea that happens to me all the time anyway, like always new things are learned from your stories and all now i think i know where Saeko was in the pass ... thou i think its a bit different but still, as well as i take it that if Rei and Minako are together already then Ami and Mako are as well. ... ill stop here KEEP IT UP!