Reviews for Protecting The Chosen One
anon chapter 11 . 10/10/2011
this was absolute shit.

everything was absolute shit.

get this monstrosity you call fiction off here.
JinxShadow12320 chapter 11 . 3/17/2011
nice story you have here! I added it to favorites as well! Nice work with all the characters!
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 11 . 11/18/2010
You just couldn't resist, could you? lol. Great Job.

YYWKMN.
birningice chapter 2 . 8/30/2010
I must say that your Sakura is completly out of character. It kinds ruins the story how you blatently make her your favorite. And what is this about her going on a solo mission? when she was 11, (you said before that they where the same age as Harry) She hadn't even graduated at that point! It doesn't fit at all.

Other than that it seems fine enough. You just need to work on not making one charactor (Sakura) over bearing, and over shadowing all the others.
Janica Bunny chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
think... I'll read more before I give you a definite opinion :) but so far... I think I like it!
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 11 . 6/13/2010
what going to happen next
Rigoudon3 chapter 11 . 5/16/2010
Funny! Is there going to be another chapter?
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 11 . 5/16/2010
that was a nice way to end this story!
Twisted Musalih chapter 11 . 5/16/2010
Great story! I enjoyed reading it very much.
Rigoudon3 chapter 10 . 5/15/2010
Soooo awesome! No offense but i dont care if Sakura dies. i dont really like her character. XP
Twisted Musalih chapter 10 . 5/15/2010
Sakura died. Cant wait to read more. Update soon
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 10 . 5/15/2010
that was awesome!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 9 . 5/15/2010
that was awesome i loved it!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 8 . 5/15/2010
that was awesome!
Rigoudon3 chapter 8 . 5/13/2010
Awesome chapter! i liked the lemon drops!XD
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